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This novel has very good grammar, it is pleasent to read and only suffers from slight repetition with certain words and sentences. The first 13 chapters are confusing and the action is somewhat hard to follow, but it sets up a background for future development, so please read all the free chapters before deciding to continue or not. Because the story is actually quite good so far and has lots of potential. Author i hope that you continue to include the other characters in a meaningful way, because i wory this will become a story where the mc is the only one capable of handling things. Such a story can quickly become boring and repetitive. Otherwise you are doing a good job, make sure there is character development as the story progresses. *I like how sirius actually cries a lot, since he is a kid that makes him realistic as well, some authors just make the mc emotionless beasts from the beginning.

Strike hard, fast and eliminate* Strike and hit are the same thing, so you shouldn’t repeat it

Unique story with good writing and character development. Not enough chapters. No matter who you are, this stroy will give you a good experience.

Saw the story had a new chapter. Just wanted to say that i very much enjoy this story and i hope it can continue.

The stupidity of the masses and*

Streaks*

Unable to get = unavailable* ?

Throne room*

I like the story so far and i hope the author keeps the chapters coming wirh the same quality. I was wondering if the whole rebirth in a new world thing is just a background for the character development or if we will come to a point where he dies an starts over in a new world. I prefer the first of the two. I hope there won’t be a lot of new characters and instead vigger focus on growth for the main and side characters. Keep up the good work

I liked the beginning but by chapter 60 and even before that, it just lost so much structure in the powerscaling and overall logic that i can’t read it anymore. This seems harsh but from the initial part of the story, i just thought it could have been so much better.