NightroPulse
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Should extend the [U] in Sakura, instead of the [K], and the [A] in chan, not the [N]. Just wouldn't sound right.
Canonically, Frieza already explained it as him choosing that color while creating that transformation. So gold isn't a default preset for that transformation. All Cooler did was copy Frieza for HIS golden form as well.
Lol, again, my first response to you, saying that it would be overlooked if you don't explain your reasoning which would inevitably need to be brought up if it WERE a "casual conversation" anyways. Otherwise, adding your input is pointless. Don't care how causal your being. Then you go making $*it up, a needles argument about guesses and opinions due to you misinterpreting like always and told you numerous times to drop it and why, but you didn't. And yes, petty AND stupid, because you can't read. But yes, yes I did bring this upon myself... But how was I supposed to know you were this stupid?
My GOD! Do you not know how to READ!? For someone who said I "can't understand simple text interpretation," (which is untrue) you sure do create a lot of misunderstandings on your part, not actually reading and understanding what is there, and instead putting words in the others mouth. So for the last F'n time! I am not arguing with you on what is or is not guesses or opinions! Nor have I made any such claims! That is self-fabricated nonsense on your side! Just how many times do I have to say "I didn't say" something!? Read the last sentence of my third response to you. I am well aware that what my argument is, is guess work, not an opinion, but is in the form of a theory because it actually has supportive arguments to go off of. Not an opinion because I am well aware there are unknown variables. Yours was that the dragon has infinite energy because it was made using divine ki with no supportive arguments. Doesn't matter if it was a guess or not, especially with no valid supportive arguments, doesn't change the fact that it sounded stupid. What I do care about is how half-@zzed that guess is. My point is, don't waste peoples time with that nonsense. And I'm done here, because that's all you did, waste my time with all your misunderstandings because your an idiot who can't read! And yes, your theory at the end there is stupid. And I didn't say invalid, but would be overlooked.
Congratulations 👏, that's the first smart thing towards a supportive argument you've made. Regardless, the how is still up in the air and It can't be denied that is would still depend on the wishes that were made previously and the time frame between uses, however small. So not infinite.
Except Toriyama did...through the story... At least as much was necessary through the dragon clan. Porunga was much more capable despite the creator being much more physically weaker than Kami at the time, only held back by some rules placed on him. and Dende, not being a fighter who can be beaten by Kami, improved Shenron. Like I said, variables, not focused on ki. And I didn't say the author has to, just that the way they did it doesn't make sense. Also, the "guessing" nonsense on your part was talked about in the other post, or did you over look it? Nor have I denied that any of this is guess work, just actually backed up with supportive arguments on my part.
Yet we all clearly know from the source material that just because someone has divine energy, doesn't mean they have infinite energy. The same would obviously apply to the dragon. We also know that magical energy is different from ki, something that the namekian's dragon clan has. So a higher ki does not necessarily mean creating stronger magical capabilities for the dragon, though I'm sure there are variables and depends on the author in this case.
*wouldn't
Your mixing first and third person. Noticed earlier when you used "he" instead of "I" as well.
*King Yemma
That's a totally different method for specific results, and you know that. We also know that he didn't do anything different besides use god ki. At least try to make your arguments make a bit more sense with an appropriate theory to back it up than a vague what-if. Otherwise it can't actually be debated and will be disregarded.
Is this AI generated? It's rushed and very monotone. There's no story or character depth to it. And the moment it mentioned Naruto wanting to revive his mother, and just his mother, it became very fishy. And the Sage of Six Paths is alive since when? Serious lack of information. Assuming it is AI generated, don't post until reviewing/editing and cluttering the internet with these nonsensical stories. Seemed interesting, but turned out to be a waste of my time.
Kiri, not Kumo. -A- isn't a jinchuriki.
*Zenkai
Why all the past tense? Is Mansam dead? "Marriage was" [is], "had his moments" [has], "always did have a knack" [had], "was a good partner" [is], "He had a way of keeping me grounded" [has], "made quite the pair" [make], etc.
Except that planet never had life to begin with...
🤦🏻♂️ So it is a reader-insert? Okay, now your confusing me since this contradicts your first response since -You'-POV (2nd person)- is pretty much the reader-insert default standard. You know there's a tag for it, right? It's still an indication if that were the case, so kind of would be. stylistic choice? I just went up to chap4 with a [you] search and found it to not be prevalent. Are you confusing a self-insert for a reader-insert? Then again, no reincarnation/transmigration tag, so [semi self-insert OC] is more likely the case. I found only the following stuff from the beginning of chap2 to be easily misrepresented without reading thoroughly and funnily enough, nothing beyond that point came across as such. ("unlike the Staraptor you'd see in pokemon matches" - "when they attack, you can feel the pressure of every hit on your skin!" - "You need connections or money just to start off." - "After all, a single pokeball costs 200₽. And the cheapest berries will set you back for 15₽.") So yeah, sorry, my bad. The misleading synopsis totally didn't help though. People that don't like reader-inserts will skip because of it.
Both. Though I wouldn't say it's confusion in general since I can clearly comprehend what it's read like, but the ratio of it and digging for information on if changes later on. As well as a ranting, obviously. Needed to eventually let it out lol.
"Never 'You'-POV"? I'm sorry, if this comes off too rude, and will admit that this fanfic currently still interests me despite not reading it much yet. But it has to be said. Can you not read or remember your own story or what's in front of you for that matter? Ironic considering you're a/the author. Summary > "You are a 14 year old boy-" is not [I] (1st person). That is someone else (author/narrator) telling the reader what they are. Chapter 1, second paragraph > "Everywhere you look-" (author/narrator) telling the reader where they are looking, again, is not 1st person POV, nor can it be described as 3rd person POV. It does get to 1st person POV once it gets to "Swole Solo-POV," but doesn't last since the POV eventually ends and defaults back in chapter 2. That only leaves me to assume how often it is and isn't read like a 1st person or reader-insert. If necessary, third person would be much better, saying the name of the MC instead of [you/you're].
Not just the tags, but the summary as well. Came across this a number of times, clicked on it, then skipped. Just now, went through it quickly with [Ctrl]+[F] search>(you). The summary represents itself as a reader-insert, and until it hits a first person POV, it reads by default as a reader-insert. I can't tell you enough how stupid and annoying I find reader inserts to be. Everyone is different and makes different choices, so reader-inserts just don't work unless it's a one-shot short story where your forced to make certain choices. Using/reading [you] to refer to yourself is just dumb and feels like someone else is telling you what to do. [I] just works well as both a self-insert and reader-insert, since it can be read as someone else referring to them self or the reader referring to them self. Really, if there are a few readers that are of the same mindset as the MC, it just works by default. Two birds with one stone. There's more I can complain about, but since this doesn't have the Y/N L/N stuff, I'll leave it at that.