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I’ll have a look but for now I think we stick to the basics

cool story bro

Okay that is weird. Seeing as they are both kids (atleast physically), the others may just brush this off as a joke but the mc’s mentality is not a childs mentality.

I was going to say that he may understand the monkey, like chopper would but I take that back. The only reason chopper is able to understand animals is because he was an animal who gained human intelligence, through the Hito-Hito no mi.

Also.. I mean atleast dive deeper into some stuff. e.g, his cooking experience.. Did he know how to cook this well before hand or did he just become amazing at cookijg during his training. Last bit, some stuff feels too forced. e.g, His introduction to the Red Hair Pirates is too cheerful- in a sense. Like why would they just act so trusting after the mc said a couple words. Like I get that they are not your typical pirate group but, in the One Piece world, betrayals or some stuff like that happen. I mean have you seen blackbeard? 😭 No hate though, all love.

Bit of a dodgy start. If he wants to learn haki, just join his crew? Or just bugger off and find a way to train, seeing the mc know’s a lot about the one piece world he should just use that knowledge to do so..

Common sense from just being on the ship. From reading this chapter, I imagine a tiny time skip happened (from entering the ship to eating bbq). So there’s that.