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Ax_nevermay_cry1hตอบกลับถึง TheUltimateP1eThank you for the correction.
The troll, several feet tall, advanced heavily toward the group, its footsteps making the ground tremble.- Ax_nevermay_cry1hตอบกลับถึง TheUltimateP1e
I already corrected it in the advanced chapters.
"I didn't have time to think because of the orc attack and because of my excitement to learn the new moves, but now that I am calm there is one thing that bothers me and that is that the plot has changed a bit." - Ax_nevermay_cry20hตอบกลับถึง AnarquiaXlCh 27 Chapter 26:Title at the end
- Ax_nevermay_cry22hตอบกลับถึง ImperialFayMonarch
thanks
As they watched the dwarves dance and enjoy themselves, Aldril asked Gandalf, "By the way, Gandalf, haven't you told me what the purpose of these dwarves' expedition is?" Even though he already knew what the expedition was for, he still asked, just to have a chat with Gandalf. - Ax_nevermay_cry1dตอบกลับถึง Shishume
- Ax_nevermay_cry1dตอบกลับถึง TheUltimateP1e
Thanks, but I still have a lot to improve, from time to time some words are missing that shouldn't be there or the meaning is changed haha.
It is a beautiful night, the sky full of stars shows its splendor, the full moon illuminates the surroundings. - Ax_nevermay_cry1dตอบกลับถึง Brogdawg32Ch 27 Chapter 26:Title at the end
- Ax_nevermay_cry2dตอบกลับถึง EroSpatula
Summary: Both swords were forged by the dark elf Eöl, both were made from the material of a meteorite, his son Eöl steals Anguirel and the other is given to King Thingol, which then carries Turin and with it kills the dragon Glaurung, the first dragon. I added a prophecy that Eöl mentioned when the swords parted.
"Anglachel and Anguirel." He murmured in a trance-like state, as the two blades glowed in resonance at the mention of their names - Ax_nevermay_cry2dตอบกลับถึง jordiscus
At some point it will reach 100% and yes, exploring and finding important figures triggers the exploration to advance.
"Wow, world exploration, which was originally only 0.01%, has become 0.1%." - Ax_nevermay_cry2dตอบกลับถึง jordiscus
Yes, it will evolve, but the higher the skill, the more points it will need. In addition to the fact that in rare occasions the sleep thing will happen like Geralt. I take this sleep thing inspired by Assassin's cread valhalla.
[Skill: Universal Language; Military Survival LV2; Wolf School Style LV1; Archery LV2] - Ax_nevermay_cry3dตอบกลับถึง Nimav
There is a lot of AU, due to the mother of the Mc.
"Anglachel and Anguirel." He murmured in a trance-like state, as the two blades glowed in resonance at the mention of their names - Ax_nevermay_cry3dตอบกลับถึง LkFernandesCh 27 Chapter 26:Title at the end
- Ax_nevermay_cry3dตอบกลับถึง Guy_Slade
- Ax_nevermay_cry3dตอบกลับถึง malinizgeldiiCh 26 Chapter 25: Kill the Trolls!
- Ax_nevermay_cry4dตอบกลับถึง Kmb02
Thank you very much, this helps me a lot
For example, sometimes the correction marks me "Thorin's, Gandalf's, Aldril's" why is that? - Ax_nevermay_cry4dตอบกลับถึง Microraptor
Thank you very much, it helps me a lot, it is easier to learn from all of you.
For example, sometimes the correction marks me "Thorin's, Gandalf's, Aldril's" why is that? - Ax_nevermay_cry4dตอบกลับถึง Hippo9999
Sure, but our Mc is not yet strong enough to shoot the arrow with such force that it can penetrate into his brain.
As Thorin and Aldril spoke, the Troll, feeling a sharp pain in his nose, screamed and roared in pain. The pain was so strong that he unconsciously let go of the horse and brought his right hand to his nose, only to pull out an arrow filled with his blood.