StrikerAuthor
Hello <3. I am a Young Author who particularly loves Fantasy and System Novels. Contact me over at: https://twitter.com/StrikerAuthor
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StrikerAuthor11mthตอบกลับถึง Dabel_InfinityCh 20 The Four Obsidian Domains!- StrikerAuthor11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
This plot is so BS. You're telling me the entire time the MC has been wondering about who betrayed him and he never once thought to think back to his third life and find out his memories were tampered with?
'Someone tampered with my memories.' - StrikerAuthor1yrตอบกลับถึง Cartier_BallardCh 25 Short Plot Update!
- StrikerAuthor1yrตอบกลับถึง StrikerAuthorCh 20 The Four Obsidian Domains!
- StrikerAuthor1yrตอบกลับถึง StrikerAuthorCh 20 The Four Obsidian Domains!
- StrikerAuthor1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 20 The Four Obsidian Domains!
- StrikerAuthor1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
MC is very obviously not too intelligent since he won't just, you know, tell her the situation.
If Su Wan knew he killed the barbarian leader, she would definitely make him fight in battles after this. That would seriously affect his time for naps. - StrikerAuthor1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
When will MC ever escape lol? 50 chapters in and it doesn't seem anywhere close
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - StrikerAuthor1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
MC's parents are insanely talented and S- and A+ rank respectively, yet MC can't pass D rank? What actual BS.
'My rank limit is <D> rank, and I need to be at least <C-> rank to go through another phrase of body reconstruction...?' - StrikerAuthor1yrตอบกลับถึง GuyOnTheInternet
Yes, she's from the Oblivion Spirit World!
"Hello, my master. I am Freya, an Angel and I am your loyal World Spirit!" - StrikerAuthor1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Author I read all the chapters and loved it and am now rereading them. But these earlier chapters are filled with so many plotholes it is kind of insane.
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - StrikerAuthor1yrตอบกลับถึง RustyBoi
For real, compared to these guys, MC seems less talented.
Anyway he is high 5th circle mage with Superior grade Soul, Light and Spirit, Grand Grade Water and Earth, High grade Time and Medium grade Luck affinities." Orion said. - StrikerAuthor1yrตอบกลับถึง Jocom
The Church Of Light are more demonic than this? They immediately kill anyone they suspect being a dark mage even if that person was a Saint before awakening. They've brainwashed the entire world to believe their ideologies and kill everyone who awakens darkness as it could harm their dominance.
"Previously, the entire world was against us, but now, it's against you as well. If we want to stop ourselves from being hunted like wild beasts, we need to work together. We need to change the world! We need to destroy the world that tormented us and create a world anew! A world that will accept us! A world where we won't have to fight for our lives!" - StrikerAuthor1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 1 More Voting!
- StrikerAuthor1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
No just give the MC a vision that secretly amplified by his own cheats. No need to make the MC too much of an outlier that it harms the plot.
1) Should MC have multiple elements (4 at the beginning of the story) and gradually gain all seven. - StrikerAuthor1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
This is the best, most unique and flexible.
3) Space and Shadow