Rizki_Caturianto

It really great One piece fanfiction!! I love It!!! It have a very great plot/storyline and great english/translation.. The grammar is great too... I like how MC/Liam use his knowledge very great.. He make Strawhats Pirates more stronger.. And his power is also so broken.. Especially he can bet to back to health as soon as possible (bet vitality), and also can steal other people devil fruit.. Love it.. Love it so much your story author sama.. Keep up the great work :D

It's a very great One Piece fanfiction!! I like it!!! 👍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too... I like the idea about sign in system, then quest to do in that place.. But it still the easy place.. I think it will be interesting to see sign in place like Marineford, Enies Lobby, or Mariejois and what his quest will be.. I don't mind MC/Takumi character.. But why you must make him alcoholic since child?? Love your story author san.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍😍

It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a great plot/story and great translation/english.. The grammar is good too... I like the idea about system which help MC make/invent his new jutsu.. And all the jutsu is also very great and useful.. I like his relationship with Minato, Kushina, etc.. I understand that he can get experient from others who learn and practice his new jutsu.. But I think he's dumb and fool when he give Basic Inner Jutsu to Konoha.. He should not give the powerful like Basic Inner Jutsu (or anymore which useful and stronger) to Konoha (the Root is use his jutsu to fight him).. He say that he give it so he can saw Forbidden Scroll, but as Uchiha Hiruzen and his Council will not let him see it.. If he want to success and save, he should eliminate Danzo and make Hiruzen and his Council step down.. (hope he will kill Danzo soon) Love your story author san.. Keep up the good job 😁👍👍😍😍😍

It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it!!! 👍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too... I like this idea about review video/lightscreen in Konoha for each Hokage.. It can or will change their fate/destiny.. I hope with the 4 video, Danzo in the 61 years Konoha will die quickly.. And will their be video of 4th Hokage a.k.a Minato Namikaze, 5th Hokage a.k.a Tsunade, etc?? Why in the 3rd video there's no talk about destruction in Uzushio and Hiruzen don't do anything?? Love your story author san.. Keep up the good work 😁👍😍😍😍

It's a great Pokemon fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍 It have a great story/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too... It's really interesting & unique story.. I think this is the first time I see MC transmigrate into Pokemon world and become a Gym Leaders.. And a Poison type no less.. It will be interesting to see he battle great trainer like Red, Blue, etc.. And the girl who take his wallet is Green right?? And the girl whose friend with his gym receptionist is Yellow.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍

There's many interesting and good One Piece fanfiction actually.. Like : "Creating One Piece Manga in One Piece" or "One Piece Gold List" (sorry if there some wrong word in the title)

It's a great One Piece fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great storyline/plot and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. It interesting and unique to see MC/Logan power.. How every member or non member of Strawhats Pirates go into Manga world and get a power up, and MC get the same power up is too broken/OP I think (I usually not like story where MC get strong without training/easily got strong, but I don't know why but it's interesting me too see this story until now).. But why Logan doesn't get notification about Vivi since Alabasta?? The others get stronger but she isn't?? Is she so busy that she doesn't have a time to read manga?? And it will be interesting to see how the story now that so many change than in original story.. Like Barto is Zoro fan and not Luffy, what happen to BW who make the Strawhats Fleets, what happen to Thriller Bark victims now, what happen to Camie, Pappug, and Hachi if Strawhats not meet them, what happens to Law now, don't they make alliance with Law now, etc... Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the great job author sama.. Love your story 😁👍😍😍

This is a really really great Naruto fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 Definitely one of my favourite Naruto fanfiction.. It have a very great plot/storyline and great english/translation.. The grammar is very good too.. I love how you not make MC/Mutsuki an OP from the start author sama.. And make him strong by reward from teaching and have disciple is interesting and very good, he only get 1 reward each day from each disciple by teaching or give something is very good idea, it make him strong day by day not just in short time.. I like his interaction with others (student, disciple, friends.. It so funny 😂) I love he got teaching and cooking skill, it's very useful skill 😍 Can't wait to see next chapter.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍

It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! 👍😍 It have a good story/plot and good english/translate.. The grammar is good too.. I like MC/Funan personality.. He smart, brave, careful, and funny 😂🤣.. But I think he's too proudful, he make enemy whenever he go and talk (but that makes this story funny).. I understand we must show our power too make people doesn't want to fight us, but doesn't meant we're the one to instigate the problem, that's stupid for me.. I don't mind harem.. And it's so funny to see his interactions with many women like Shirayu, Pakura, and Kurenai.. I like how he change Itachi and Shisui (either their vision to Konoha or their fate).. By the way, where Uzumaki mother and daughter?? Can't wait to see how will you destroy/kill 3rd Hokage and especially Danzo 😁 Love your story author san.. Keep up the good work 😁👍😍😍

This is really a great Naruto fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. It's interesting, unique, and refreshing to see a new concept in Naruto fanfiction.. Where MC/Kaito not have chakra and become an Onmyoji.. It also interesting that in this story there so many demon alive, and summoning beast is a demon before.. I like MC/Kaito interactions with others.. His interaction to his nephews (Sasuke and Itachi) is so different, it's funny XD.. I also like his interaction with Yurei and Gurei.. I like how MC/Kaito destroy/defeat Danzo.. It's satisfying... I know that MC/Kaito is need to defeat Kaguya, so he try to become stronger.. But didn't he promise to teach Sasuke, he left Sasuke and Demon land/fortress for a long time now to exorcism The Box of Bliss, and others demons.. He should back soon to teach Sasuke.. Maybe have a time between demons to back to Oeyama to teach and meet Sasuke.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍😍