It was readable and has some errors but it's definitely an interesting read. ....................................................................................

definitely decent. should read first five chapter before deciding to stop reading.

sauce ?? i just need to know....

hmmm what is this novel it's been too long for me ill take what you said to heart and read the book.

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hmmm i guess ill be the unbalancer.

69th comment

yes i want to reincarnate with a system and be in his place.

69 comments oh... well 70 comments now.

thank you for the story so far it's very great so far and im looking forward to more this has been better than all the fanfiction of marvel ive been trying to read recently.

heh, 69 int

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time to make the new world order.

"emotional damage!"

same

can someone redo this book as a fanfic of it and take the chinese stuff out and exchange it with something else?

very good