PrinceB

This really is annoying ...

*unnecessary

I Understand literary expression and all but it still...using the name of an important figure to a widespread religion such as Christianity. it is disrespectful and unmindful of your readers. And borderline disrespectful

bro, well done with this story I have been having fun with it. But I must point out that it could be better also I'd like to offer to become your editor. What do you say ?

Are you for real?...What do you call a rinne-sharingan user loosing his important eye (that houses over half of his powers) to a chunin? or the death of a jinchuriki's tailed beast? keeping in mind the great shift from ninjutsu to mainstream taijutsu relegating those with ninjutsu talent to close to useless

this should be "didn't" not aren't

Isn't ming already an emperor?

did this book switch authors? because the quality seems to have dropped significantly.

I'm going out of my way to review this work. please come with me on this journey. dm me with your thoughts and gifts. Thank you.

i understand your point but not all neutral countries were poor meaning not all third world countries are poor. just understand that