moment of silence

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A little less than five stars because there are only five chapter right now but the story is promising .

harem are unrealistic if any thing how can one person love all the women equally is beyond me in a day there are only 24 hour how can spend it with so many girls is beyond me .

story building is necessary take time todo it but dot over do it .

his father took hook him to the front lines to experience it . it canon as well I have seen so many author mention it as well .

yoruichi form bleach was the probably the one of first anime I watched

galar

take care of yourself man health is more important then posting a chapter .

my dude you just killed Kakashi and Itachi character as if it was nothing since when " has Itachi said that was awesome and that to anbu Itachi" . sure wanted show him as op but dude Itachi is not itadori who was impressed fast with things like that.

also the word phantom has to means something right(like it can by pass things like a concept of course not immediately has to get to sukuna and gojo level i am guessing ?

i think you could inspiration form donflamingo in one piece he uses string to fly , repair organs , make a f**king bird cage a on a whole Island which in one piece is not small , control people like puppets , domain can be like him changing everything to string around him , etc ( maybe you have a better idea). also repair organ is before the mc learns reverse curse energy ( yuta learned it in less than a year without a cheat I am not including rika because she is busted just his curse technique to copy any curse technique is broken and rika acting as storage and side fighter is domain is even more so) but I Can imagine mc being a cross Between sukuna and donflamingo because his string can't be seen easily .

this is a better option as we know nothing about the founder era sure it would be interesting to know about their era but the story world background is something would be annoying to understand.

Wanted to ask as skypia happened before this arc so why aren't the straw hats familiar with the fruit especially nami , zoro, or sanji the are monst observant of the bunch as Robin is not with them right now ?

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syther evos to scizor the sword dance+ agility (combo ) technicians ( ability of scizor) attack with bullet punch on entry for good damage. also u- turn to switch in unfavorable condition

name changed

The review after the story change .It is now a promising fanfiction stable updates etc just a better experience than before .