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So... The first 4 chapter's weren't bad but the addition of a girlfriend plus the fact that it just happened that she had powers made it plummet into a less than medium novel especially the part of her accepting whatever he did as if he is the messiah it was unnecessary. Plus isn't he 16? Why is he sleeping with her ? Another thing aren't those gang's too poor robing several of them only resulted in 200k or is it that he have hidden cash or that he give it to the system if he did did he buy something? Or u keeping in suspense .

I don't about the rest but the choice of making him seal chakra as if chakra is the source of all that is bad is a bad choice and will probably make this ff go down and waste its potential plus the real source of bad things is humans them self taking away chakra will not help but will probably make it worse and u have an example in our world see all the wars? Plus imagine someone with all that power losing it ? The first thing they'll do is probably search for another substitute wich will make it much more bad than it is as for chakra as mich as it had given destruction it also gave hope having the possibility of someone achieving strength and making things better maybe a better way is making jutsus more widespread and making people include in various fields so that chakra isn't solely bound to destruction but also include it in their daily lives through agriculture etc

Can't say much since only 2 chapters r out but this seems to have potential and may have a chance to be great well atleast better than the other ones that r on trending rn

it's interesting after all he isn't their real son though we don't know if he transmigrated or reincarnated it's still hard to conceive new emotions towards new people after losing everything in his old world u can't expect him to have that innate love for them especially that he only met them rarely and from what the author implied while it might seem he was cold but actually he too yearned for some love and that is shown when he tried to compliment her after all people are socially weird creatures and his way of showing his affection is different especially when he is stressed around by the impact he might have caused on the world and the death looming over his head after all the thing one have trust in the most is one's own abilities anyone in his place will act the same if not more extreme if faced with the same situation. and as a Conclusion both sides were wrong and both sides aren't to blame both had their own circumstances wich led to the state they r in. maybe in a perfect world with perfect people they would've been harmonious despite the hardships but in this scenario they didn't see nor understand what the other side was facing leading to this misunderstanding

Well no body really love's a broken family however from a literary pov it's interesting after all he isn't their real son though we don't know if he transmigrated or reincarnated it's still hard to conceive new emotions towards new people after losing everything in his old world u can't expect him to have that innate love for them especially that he only met them rarely and from what the author implied while it might seem he was cold but actually he too yearned for some love and that is shown when he tried to compliment her after all people are socially weird creatures and his way of showing his affection is different especially if he is stressed around by the impact he might have caused on the world and the death looming over his head after all the thing one have trust in the most is one's own abilities anyone in his place will face the same if not more and as a Conclusion both sides were wrong and both sides aren't to blame both had their own circumstances wich led to the state they r now maybe in a perfect world with perfect people they would've been harmonious despite the hardships but in this scenario they didn't see nor understand what the other side was facing leading to this misunderstanding

tbf 50 percent of her power should have been around the 88 to 90 lvl since she is at 92 lvls cause there's massive leap specially after the 90nt rank every level is like a new realm

hmm did u guy's reach a consensus ?

ur talking as of he has to stick the pairings manually when he literally can just pass by them and ask the system to bind them there's no need 4 overcomplecation it's not like they will kill every one that pass by their side no matter how young master r they like plus there was no guarantee that he will get the danger free version so it's just plot armor and if he had to follow the original he would have wasted a lot of time waiting 4 yao chen and probably missed a lot of opportunities including the most simple thing wich is strengthening xu er meridians

is it the dna of the guy that was training with him?

2 weeks?