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Onion_CG7mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วthis is probably the better choice for the fic to go so that you get more breathing room and so you have an actual reason to introduce a new power.
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Eating George's meat had made me slightly muscular but my forelimbs and shoulders were the most defined. - Onion_CG7mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I think this would be the best option for the story to add a bit of depth to the character and the world
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quack bang
"First, none of your business. Second not steal as in theft, STEAL as in Strategic Transfer of Equipment to Alternate Location. You should know the military loves acronyms." - Onion_CG8mthตอบกลับถึง SupremeEdzzz
^ what they said
I want to ask, would you guys want me to redo everything besides certain chapters, combine chapters with more depth, or just leave it be since besides chapter 1, which I think is fine, the rest could use fixing or a continuation with the fixes for this story as I honestly have been reinspired for this series - Onion_CG9mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
it should be Stan.M.Lee
"Stan W. Lee!" Aunt May's tone turned stern, and her reproachful look made grandpa squirm under the weight of her gaze. "We'll have a serious conversation about putting your nephew in danger with your reckless driving, right after you're done moving all your belongings into the house. But for now, come inside. You both must be tired and thirsty after such a long drive." - Onion_CG11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 6 Continue?
- Onion_CG1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 105 No Autographs, punk.
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blue
[Upgrade engine tunes to 4, instal a turbo booster, Respray the bike red, white and bleu, Change the tires to offroad tires, make them bulletproof and at bleu smoke when doing burn out] - Onion_CG1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
tons worth of material
Jin, on another hand, could be seen lifting tons of worth materials and other things with inhumane efficiency. And with the last set of materials left, he dropped them off to where they needed to be. - Onion_CG1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 9 09
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did you draw this?
--Genesis Loki Swan-- - Onion_CG1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 49 Chapter 47
- Onion_CG1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 49 Chapter 47
- Onion_CG1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
+1
2.Some sort of walking dead fic.