KK_Khine

I really appreciate your review! 🥰 It means a lot that you found the plot engaging and liked the writing style. I hear you on the creative descriptions. I'm having doubts about that too. whether I should go for a more straightforward writing or not....😅 I'll work on finding a better balance. Your feedback is incredibly motivating, and I'm eager to keep the story rolling. Thanks a million for reading the novel and sharing your thoughts!

just wrapped up this novel to chapter 6 and I gotta talk about it. It's a pretty cool story with some seriously interesting character stuff going on. I'm all about the evolving dynamic between Sereny and Helvin. Helvin's slick moves and Sereny's dedication as a Commodore make things super intriguing! 😆I'm super curious about Cole and Helvin's history. Feels like there's a juicy backstory there waiting to be spilled🤓One small thing, though – some parts felt a bit long, and I might've skimmed through them. But overall, this novel's really got potential, and I'm pumped to see where it's headed. If you're into stories with complex characters and a dash of mystery, you must give this a shot. And really good job, author. Waiting for more updates 😁

I totally get where you're coming from regarding Catherine's behavior. Spoiler Alert! You see, Luis had his reasons for acting kinda distant and not caring for her at all back then – he didn't want her to get too attached so that she would be less heartbroken when he finally left her after his mission. And as for Catherine being the mafia boss's daughter, it's almost like a top-secret thing. She's had a surprisingly normal life considering her background. So, don't worry; there's more to her character than meets the eye! Things will finally make sense as the story unfolds But I'll keep your feedback in mind and work on making her actions feel more understandable😊

Hey there, I've been diving into your story, and it's quite the rollercoaster! I'm loving the emotional depth of characters like Andromeda, but I gotta admit, sometimes the plot feels a bit confusing. It's like untying a knot sometimes. Maybe a bit more straightforward storytelling in a few chapters could help. Still, I'm hooked, and your storytelling skills are impressive. Keep it up, and find that sweet spot between complexity and clarity!😆

your story sounds to me really interesting! I see so much potential here. Your writing style is different from mine but I realize this perfectly suits your narrative and your story. It will definitely manage to pique the readers' curiousity. Just one thing. please make longer chapters at least with word counts of 1000 per chapter. There's only this one thing to remind you. And so far, I don't see nothing to criticize 😆

hello there, thanks for checking out the story! Glad to hear you find the idea interesting and like where the plot is going. 😄I'll definitely work on improving the writing quality. really appreciate your feedback 😊

Thank you for your lovely feedback 😊

I've been playing around with different writing styles from some of my favorite authors in my recent chapters, and I have to admit I also notice how the flow from one chapter to another ended up sounding a bit wonky. 😅 But hey, I'm having a blast with this little experiment! Thanks a bunch for your honest feedback. I'll definitely aim to keep my writing style more consistent in the upcoming chapters. 😊

Hey there! I've been reading your story from chapter 1 to 10, and I've got some thoughts to share. First off, I really like the concept of blood energy and the tattoos. It adds a unique and intriguing element to the story. However, I'd suggest explaining some of the concepts a bit more clearly, especially for readers who might not be familiar with your world's rules😄The pacing is generally good, but be mindful not to overwhelm readers with too much information too quickly. Balance is key, right?😊Your protagonist's background is fascinating, and I'm curious to learn more about their motivations and emotions as the story progresses. Dive deeper into their character development, and it'll make them even more relatable.When it comes to dialogue, try to make it feel even more natural. Sometimes it can sound a bit forced, but that's a minor thing that can easily be polished.Adding more sensory details to the world and characters can really enhance the reading experience.Just my suggestions 😁Lastly, your story has a lot of potential. Keep refining your writing skills, and I'm excited to see where you take these characters and this unique world. Keep up the great work! 📚🖋️

There's just no fault to say about your writing style author. It has been an interesting read. I have to take a little time to read again at certain scenes but I was able to understand them eventually. when the protagonist finds out how to adapt to this newfound dark cultivation magic, I'd like to see him experiencing struggles, facing problems and learning how to overcome them with hard work. please don't make it easy for him, cuz the more he struggles, the more we feel related to him as we are also humans with problems and difficulties. hoping for you next updates author 😄💖