The fanfic is good and unique, but the author needs to review their chapters. Most scenes show signs of ChatGPT. There's nothing wrong with using it for some ideas or correcting spelling errors, but the tool makes the story overly melodramatic with cliché words that are easy to spot.

This has a lot of potential. If the author doesn't abandon it in the future, this could be one of the best Naruto fanfics out there. It's been a while since I found a fic that wasn't about some stupid wish fulfillment. I had even given up on reading fanfics since there haven't been any good ones lately. But this one has a lot of potential. The pace of the story is very good, the relationship is nice, and the character isn't overly OP, though he has potential. Now we just have to hope the author continues.

Okay, I don't know how people manage to read it because I tried hard to read it and didn't understand anything at all. There are so many details that I got lost in the entire story. The author overdid it with ChatGPT. It's a shame because the idea was good. I would like to read a pirate novel.

It's too much useless detail. If it continues like this, it simply won't be possible to go on. There's so much detail that the reader ends up getting lost and not understanding anything.

Konan I can understand because she likes Yahiko in the original work, so she will probably like him in this fic as well. But Karen, Karin's mother in the original, is a good character.

Only in Japanese fics. I’ve read practically most of the top-ranked ones, and they didn’t have this flaw. It’s fine if the author doesn’t want to create a love interest—many don’t like that—but I’m complaining about the lack of personality. It’s not wrong to say that if the MC isn’t a well-crafted character, the story is practically ruined. Up to where I’ve read, the character is 14 years old and hasn’t had any personal development. And no, I completely disagree with the idea that wanting to get stronger is a given. If the MC doesn’t have an objective, there’s no reason to get stronger, even if it’s a silly objective. In my opinion, there has to be one, otherwise it makes no sense. I’m sad because the story has a lot of potential.

It seems like his love interest is his own system because he literally only lives to gain new cheats from the system. And you might ask me why he wants to get stronger? I'd like to know that too…

I read up to chapter 90, and I think the worst thing about this fic is the lack of personality of the MC. Japanese fanfics have this flaw; I don't know why. They create a fanfic with immense potential, plan various scenarios within the fic to make a cool conclusion, but the personality, which is the main aspect, is lacking. And I'm not just talking about this fic; most of the ones I read in MTL are like this. They make the protagonist's dialogue sarcastic. I'll cite an example from one of the chapters I took: "It is senior. Just like Hanzo-sensei, Danzo-senpai is also someone I respect. Danzo-senpai also provided many plans to seize power and helped me become the leader of the Akatsuki organization. He was a friendly and good senior. He ran very fast when we last met, otherwise, I would still like to reminisce with him. After all, he ran away too quickly." Without him, I probably wouldn't be the leader of the Akatsuki organization now." (Yes, this was supposed to be sarcasm from the MC right after Danzo tried to kill him in an ambush, which logically failed.) So I don't need to say much; in terms of personality, the MC is very lacking. He has no motivation to become stronger, no real connection with other characters, and no one he romantically likes. It seems like he only lives for his system. If it weren't for the poor development of the MC, this fic could be first-rate because the details are very good. If the author who is translating would change and create a new fic based on this one, adding more details and better dialogues, it could be better.

I read all the available chapters. At the beginning, the romance is very good, but as the story progresses, it becomes a bit tiring since there isn't much plot. The MC can solve problems easily with his IA. I don't know if the author will introduce new villains and expand the romance world, as he made it clear that all events take place in one city. If the author broadens the world, it should cover this part, but I still don't see the protagonist being surpassed. Besides the IA, he has various skills. Is it good? Yes, it is. The author promised a romance, and that's what he delivered. The couple has chemistry. P.S.: There are some translation errors, but it's easy to understand.

Dude, the only problem with this fanfic that I can point out is the lack of chapters, because this is by far the best fanfic I've ever read related to showbiz.

When he was describing the girl, I could have sworn it was Toru. I got a bit excited since it would be interesting if only the MC could see her, considering her powers. At least the part about the glasses he always wears would have more meaning. If the author reads my comment and takes it into account, I would appreciate it.

I read the rest of the book, and my opinion remains the same. I don't feel any emotion from the characters, and I still can't grasp the real personality of the MC. The dialogues are mediocre; it seems like the author constantly wants to portray the MC in a favorable light, making him appear badass and causing others to fear him. This is very unrealistic and makes everything seem too easy for the protagonist. The girls fall for him the first time they meet him, he says he loves them after a week, and then he gets a woman pregnant (the MC is under 18). Moreover, he became a Major very easily. It's fine that the author wrote about the MC's achievements and all, but it's clear they don't understand how difficult it is to rise in the ranks in the military, which takes years. At most, he would receive commendations for his services. So, the fic has a lot of forced plot elements. This is my review for future readers.

"I'm starting this fic now. Lately, I've been interested in fanfics set in the 1940s, but I have to say I expected something different. I haven't read it all, just the beginning, but the author was unfortunate in the first part. The MC was a gangster leader and has a personality like that??? I expected a tough MC from the start, and I think everyone who read it did too; it was the obvious thing to do. But instead, we see an MC who's somewhat childish and aimless. If you had made the MC a regular citizen in his previous life, it would have been much easier to explain his personality. But we're talking about a gangster, for God's sake. The guy should have seen his share of deaths and had an objective to follow as soon as he reincarnated. But in the first chapters, he and his supposed friend are watching a young girl secretly dance ballet. That's teenage movie stuff. And another thing I found really bad was the supposed help he received from the policeman. Seriously, the MC asked the policeman to light a cigarette and the policeman introduces him to the Don???? What is this, author? You could have done better. You could have had the policeman see Adam's wounds and feel sorry for him, but what you did was very forced. First of all, anyone who has contact with the Don could never introduce someone they don't know because if the MC caused any problem for the family, the policeman who introduced him would be blamed. So no one in their right mind would do that. We're talking about a mafia family here; is it that easy to get in touch with them??? And why would the Don help the MC??? From his perspective, a 16-year-old teenager wouldn't add anything to the family. What favor could he do for the Don? I'm not trying to discourage you, author. I know it's difficult to write fics, but as a reader, I have to point out the obvious so you can see where you're going wrong and improve. The fic isn't bad; the grammar is good, the pacing is nice… I'll keep reading, and I'll give my final opinion in this review later."

"Bro, the fic is really good, you can see the amount of effort the author puts into their writing. The research to create a fic like this must be extensive. Are there mistakes? Yes, of course, but they are totally passable, nothing too serious. The grammar is good, the details are well done, and the MC has only gotten with the hottest women so far. However, he's not the typical degenerate MC. The author promised a Hollywood-level fic and delivered exactly that. To me, what the author is doing is a true masterpiece. I only have one thing to say: 'let the author cook, because I want more!'"

I will make an honest evaluation: This is a novel with a well-known style, a boy who reincarnates in the body of a background character from a novel he read and blah blah blah. As far as I have read, it was enjoyable, but nothing too extravagant; it's something to pass the time. For future readers, it's worth mentioning that the novel is not perfect. The dialogues are quite simple and there is no plot or anything that excites the reader (at least from what I have read). But there is a good side: the novel is straightforward and without much beating around the bush, so we see the MC quickly developing in strength and romantically as well, since the author makes it clear who the MC's love interest will be, and they start dating in the early chapters. From my point of view, this was a good thing, as it breaks the tradition of most novels where the MC only gets into a relationship in the final chapters, so this earned it a positive point. In the end, my rating is a 6.5. The reading is pleasant and the chapters draw you to the next one. For those who want a simple and straightforward read, it's a good choice.

A question: Did the author base Johnny English's personality on Mr. Bean? Because I totally imagine that actor when I read, and nothing anyone says will change my mind. Without a doubt, the best character. Kkkkkkkjjj

Okay, I persisted and continued reading the book, and I’m finally able to see the enormous gem hidden here. The book is extremely well done, the MC has matured, although he still has some flaws, but I can now appreciate his personality. What caught my attention the most, without a doubt, were the interactions with other characters. Seriously, I was afraid of reading about a cold and ruthless MC who couldn’t relate to anyone. Many authors make this mistake, making the protagonist only truly interact with his women. But in this book, we see the opposite, where the MC makes real friends and isn’t the typical cold protagonist, which makes the book 100% better. Although there are some annoying things like the out-of-order POV shifts, or how it seems the MC has a 10000000/100 luck because everything seems to go right for him, you end up adapting to these inconsistencies as you continue with the novel and don’t really mind them much. I totally recommend this book.

I see that you like slice of life, and it really is difficult to find good ones of this type. From Modern Family, the only one that really interested me was the one you mentioned. But I'll recommend one that I think is very good; it's also a slice of life, but the main character's dream is to become an actor: "I'm on TV! (Showbiz SI)" by BarCalak.

Here's my honest opinion: I only gave it 5 stars because I don't have a definitive opinion about the novel yet, and I don't want to harm the author since it seems to be a very good novel. But I have to say that the beginning is really discouraging, and this is due to the MC's personality. I've never seen a protagonist so stupid. Sometimes I wonder if the problem is with me, if I'm the one who lacks patience for character development, but man, the MC is a reincarnated old man, he knows most of the events, he has an awesome brother (who should be the protagonist), and yet he keeps screwing up over and over. It’s infuriating. It's only the 50th chapter and the protagonist has almost died several times because of his stupidity. When the AI advises him, he says, "Yeah, I need to improve." And in the next chapter, he screws up again!!!!! This is very off-putting for any reader. It's not possible that only I feel this way. I understand that the author wanted to show development, but stupidity has its limits. What the protagonist does is just nonsense. Thanks for reading my rant. :3

I haven't finished reading all the available chapters yet, but just from the beginning, I can tell the story is going to be very good. It's been a while since I read a romance about taming beasts, so I got excited about the title. But, brother author, I have to confess, man, I didn't like the character's image, haha. He looks like an adult child, even has a beard to shave, lol. The AI messed you up, brother, but I liked the images of the beasts.