Matthew_Gooche

Of course you're stupid. I have never once heard of those who possessed eidetic memory being prone to 'overloading', in the same sense it's described in this novel. The entire premise is ridiculous, hence my response. Wendell was correct in faulting the idea, because it's utter nonsense.

Thank you for the heads-up.

Not to mention, when both girls finally die, he suddenly becomes all crazed. This is just transparently idiotic.

The protagonist continually acts in contradiction to his belief. He espouses a lack of trust towards all, yet will often place temporary trust in those around him regardless. For example Jane and Diana, they are almost entirely useless, he decided to show all his cards, and then questions whether or not to kill them... is he retarded? Why even insist on moving with them at all? His guards were sufficient, they amounted to very little, not to mention their undue ownership of loot. He continues to be completely idiotic in how he manages his secrets, he doesn't want people to know, tells everyone, feels betrayed, and then wants to kill them. For someone who is supposedly supremely intelligent, he is a complete fool, I don't even understand what foreseeable boons he seeks to obtain in doing all that. It just makes for tedious and painfully stupid reading. It's another pathetic protagonist who seemingly can't exist without companions, I will never understand the rationale.

I believe he is calling the prospect stupid, which it truly is. So in that respect, you seem quite idiotic yourself.

This codependent mindset is for weaklings.

My thoughts exactly.

How would that make any sense? 'Perfect intelligence' is a misnomer to begin with. You can't exactly perfect something that isn't faulty.

Stupidity.

The protagonist is brash, brainless and boring. He acts like a child, the romance is frankly sickening, and he seems far to concerned with everyone around him. Too selfless and stupid for his own good. Pacing is slow, and the writing is too diluted, paragraphs of writing to explain the smallest details, every explanation is superfluous, and leaves nothing to be assumed. Mind you, the protagonist's lack of intelligence does influence this greatly, as he seems unable to discern even the most obvious of details. No redeeming factors, the author is a terrible writer, stop supporting this piece of trash. I don't even care much for character development, but it's evident the author is either a child or a moron, he is wholly unable to portray any adult.