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A couple of two Asian male authors who want to create the best in their compositions.
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senshiAuthor2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วOh holy sh, finally this is back
Azuma was panting on the ground, a sheen layer of cold sweat covered him as his vision blurred and became cloudy.- senshiAuthor2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
At least they managed to survive lol His abilities manifested as I kept reading this chap closely. A lot of pleasure I gain reading it, really, so thanks for the chapter!
"To the exit!" Azuma called out, "Now!" - senshiAuthor2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Torfinn moment The greatness epitomizes the humbleness.
Azuma took out two of his knives, slashing them across a hunter who looked unfazed. He let his instincts take control, to have the system guide his moves as he was slammed down on the ground. - senshiAuthor2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
The only one who thinks rationally.
Azuma whispered, "Then we must make a way." - senshiAuthor2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
ERROR! ERROR!
"I think…" Azuma rubbed his temples, "Someone is injured, let me check it out." - senshiAuthor2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
How come they already started using -sama? I thought they weren't cause enough to themselves as they met each other not so long ago. But I can relate to it
"It belongs to Misaki–sama," Haru said, the puzzlement growing in her eyes, "Is this… blood?" - senshiAuthor2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I would cry praising this story if the underground had its own time and they really wandered for a long time
TRPR/9823: It's clearly been a long time - senshiAuthor2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
A whole underground kingdom?
The two of them walk down the empty corridors of a buried underground temple. There were statues of gods and goddesses, mythical creatures, and stranger things carved out in the stone walls. - senshiAuthor2yrแปะแล้ว
The prologue was exhilirating to read, it gave me psychological discussion mood, lol. By the way, the first five chapters are interesting as the story cannot uncover all events that happened. Since it's only the start of the story (I'm currently at 6th chap), I'm 100% confident to say that I'll surely be reading it forth just to know if there is a real thing beyond the veil!
- senshiAuthor2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Sounds strange to describe of herself over everyone else. She seems to be an egocentric? Still I don't even know her character.
Is it wrong that I am born with a huge advantage over everyone else? Is my intelligence the only thing that people wanted from me? - senshiAuthor2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Beautiful respond. Another sigma rule to be pinned
The guy stared at me then pulled a bad finger, and walked away. - senshiAuthor2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
No way XD Electrocars are for hillbllies
"Breaking News! A student has discovered a way to transfer Rabbit's DNA into herself, and grew Rabbit Ears!" - senshiAuthor2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Here I remembered Ayanokoji with his question, "Is there equality in this world?" I gave the analogy because I like psychology and this kind of thinking. It's very interesting
Do we live in a world where everybody can be happy? No. - senshiAuthor2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Great start.
It doesn't matter, right? As long as you have that drive to reach the top, you can be whoever you want. Whether you just want a simple life or the strength to be the prime minister or a leader of a large community, as long as you have the talent and skills, you can achieve all of those things. - senshiAuthor2yrแปะแล้ว
A neat, easy-going, and relatively gentle work. A beautiful cover possessing a decent and pleasing vibe — it's nice to know that the author tried to find something interesting, similar to the feel of his work, to put in the cover. The effortless beginning comforts the reader with an understandable writing style, so everyone can read it!
- senshiAuthor2yrตอบกลับถึง EldritchBlade
Grammar mistakes... Thanks again, as I've noticed I made many mistakes that actually can put a reader to misunderstanding
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - senshiAuthor2yrตอบกลับถึง EldritchBlade
Oh, there is a grammar mistake. I'm sorry
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