World_Eater117
So there isn't really much to say honestly, I'm an introvert.Reading is like breathing for me, it's essential, if U had to breathe only for every other hour.I'm pretty new to the writing block, that's that
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World_Eater1174mthตอบกลับถึง LostGingersApollo is a Greek god, not norse
"Even his own name… Usually, when I read a person's thoughts and they think of themselves, they aren't saying their own name in their heads. Instead, they project an image of themselves and subconsciously understand that this is a reflection of who they are. But Apollos refers to himself by this name, but also simultaneously thinks of himself as a godly archer, a musician, the sun, a poet and even an oracle."- World_Eater1174mthแปะแล้ว
- World_Eater1175mthตอบกลับถึง RealistKun
That's kinda racist, I've read tons of amazing books by Chinese authors
"Seriously, his murderous intent was very strong, he has definitely already killed someone!" - World_Eater1175mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I'll attack him and kill him, if it doesn't work, he won't kill a helpless old man
"I'm sorry; I was wrong!" Patriarch Unnur felt his heart beat faster, seeing that his sneak attack did not work. "Forgive me! Don't kill me!" - World_Eater1175mthตอบกลับถึง Pepper_Chicken
I walked all the way from china on one foot
In a room belonging to the male dormitory of Beijing University. - World_Eater1175mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Too much information
As much as she tried not to make too much noise, the moment she sat down in the restroom, loud sounds echoed through the room. Cristina turned so red, it could be mistaken for a ripe tomato. - World_Eater1175mthตอบกลับถึง BigBroCa
thank you, I don't see why everyone has to have a bad backstory
Cristina Orland felt like she was being watched, but that was something that was often due to the old clothes she wore, so she didn't think much about it. She kept walking, and the sadness only got stronger since she was never treated well at home. - World_Eater1175mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Immortal technique: Abstaining Monk
'When the smaller worlds appear, those arrogant beings will once again try to take over the world. Last time I was tricked by one of these people, that damn witch and ended up cultivating a technique that made me sexually impotent...' - World_Eater1176mthตอบกลับถึง DaoistTranslator
I'm literally in bed laughing and crying my eyes out
Then, the initially weak character would say, "Seems like facing three at once is indeed a bit challenging." - World_Eater1176mthแปะแล้ว
Honestly I've been disappointed with what I've read so far.Writing quality is so poor and story progression is just all over the place, you can't just skip parts of a story if it has impact on the storyline.You told us something about the orphanage that brought a qualitative change to the mc but you didn't specify it, just kept it vague.It's too late for this book but take note on your next book.
- World_Eater1176mthตอบกลับถึง SIDUZ
no, that's inaccurate, he was promised power which the mc didn't have to give
"Aren't you tired?" I asked him. "Tired of being weak? Tired of feeling helpless?" I knew he carried the weight of his vulnerability, his yearning for change. I wanted to stoke his anger, his desperation, to make him yearn for strength like never before. - World_Eater1176mthตอบกลับถึง Guiltythree
- World_Eater1176mthตอบกลับถึง ImaginarySnow
that's a low blow
School Rank: 2450/2450 - World_Eater1176mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
are you sure you should be using solace in this sentence.
In a way, that was how my face and skin looked like from the beginning of my life. Both my sister and I had pale skin, different from our counterparts, and adding my weak body to the equation, I would be alone most of the time, thus resulting in my solace. - World_Eater1176mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Ok, this just got real stupid, wouldn't be need an actual modicum of power to tempt him, or was he so desperate that he just believed anything he was told.
"Aren't you tired?" I asked him. "Tired of being weak? Tired of feeling helpless?" I knew he carried the weight of his vulnerability, his yearning for change. I wanted to stoke his anger, his desperation, to make him yearn for strength like never before. - World_Eater1176mthตอบกลับถึง Darkness_Enjoyer
cuz dat makes so much sense
Then, why was this gut a villain? It was pretty simple. Because Astron was someone that was also at the bottom of the academy and stayed as weak as he was, he was envious of the main character's achievements and would later sell his soul to demons and would become a Djinn. - World_Eater1176mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Hey Author, you're doing a good job somewhat, but pay attention to detail, I don't know if other people are the same. But all these little inconsistencies in grammar is a big turnoff for me.
And at that moment, I noticed. I was not looking at the world from the eyes of someone other.