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ARKirby

ARKirby

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2021-12-07 เข้าร่วมแล้วUnited States
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การเขียน

0.6h

ของการอ่าน

22

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ป้าย
4
โมเมนต์
5
  • ARKirby
    ARKirby3 years ago
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    Opps, I was so caught up with reading that I forgot to leave a review lol 😅 IMO this is a fantastic story with a quality flow. The fact that this isn't written in your first language is mindblowing! Not many novels are as well written as yours (and their first language is English). The story's plot is intriguing, and the detail you have put into worldbuilding paints a perfect picture in the readers' minds. It's like an all-in-one package deal! I will be following along to see how this ends. Keep going!

  • ARKirby
    ARKirby3 years ago
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    It's a very intriguing story so far. Nicely written, and the flow is incredible. I think the mysteriousness of all the characters had me adding it to continue later, but it could have been the way you tell the story. Keep it up!

  • ARKirby
    ARKirby3 years ago
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    I really had no other choice but to add this to my library. It’s witty, entertaining, and well written. A genuine rare diamond that I will be sure to follow along with! You’re doing a fantastic job!

  • ARKirby
    ARKirby3 years ago
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    Awe I feel for Emma, but her ex was an absolute tool anyways. 🙄 His friend, Jason, on the other hand… 😏 This story just grips you and forces you to read on to know what happens next. Before I knew it I was deep in chapter 6 lol 😅 Overall the story is very interesting, I look forward to more chapters! Keep it up!

  • ARKirby
    ARKirby3 years ago
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    Nicely done, especially since this is your first time writing in your second language! Btw the ailen’s kinda remind me of the ones from Home 😅

Mean to You

!!WARNING: MATURE CONTENT!! ************************* Gemma Chambers is a curious young woman met with a tragic fate. After an unexpected run-in with a man she's never seen before, Gemma leaves her friend's party and winds up dead. Or that is, however, what some thought until she crossed a barrier into a world of hell and secrecy. Finding herself held captive and forced to work as a maid for a king that has it out for her and not in a good way. The longer Gemma resides in his world, the more her very own pandora's box is forced open. Will Gemma be able to escape the grasps of this tyrant King of Hell? ***************************** "You couldn't be more ignorant to the damage you have caused, could you?" "I am not the one to blame for your actions. If you want someone to point a finger at then look in a damn mirror!" Gemma spat, throwing her slender finger in the direction of the wall. She was sick of being blamed for his outbursts. She didn't even know how she ended up in this hell, let alone why this man acted the way he did. If someone had told Gemma that she would be stuck in the underworld with a psycho King a few days ago, she would have laughed in their face and called them crazy. Yet, here she was. Screaming at Leviathan, the only one who could help her, as he continued to blame her for slaughtering another man! "You want me to point a finger in the mirror." Leviathan stated with venom and irritation, and Gemma gulped. His face grew dark, and Gemma stumbled backward to run away, knowing she screwed up massively this time. Before she could even turn. Leviathan stood behind her. In a flash, her body was pinned against the cool surface of the mirror with his. Gemma tried to squirm from his hold, causing him to push against her more, cracking the mirror and cutting her cheek. "You want me to point a finger in the mirror than I will, but you will stand infront of me when I do so." He hissed, and Gemma yelped. ************************* Note from the author This will probably be a faster paced story but we shall see. Thank you for taking interest in this novel and I hope you enjoy!

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