yahye_mohamed

Bro these chapters are so repeyitive, the story has a good angle but your chapters are so short

Well done bro, cant wait to see the next chapter. Will you publish it today or tommorow?

Well done my g, onse again you showing people whose boss

Verry good, i cant wait for the next episode, i wonder how the velaryeons will react to Aerion?

Haha exactly g, i like the way you think, i hope thats what happens though, but its a bit nerve wracking after we saw the latest chapter, lol

I wasn’t thinking about advantage, more of a selfish note, Aerion in my opinion hasn’t been selfish enough. Yes a marriage between leanor and rheanyra would be advantageous but it would make all of the prior chapters where Arion and Rheanyra built their relationship pointless….thats just my thought dude

Well done Author, cant wait to see the next episode, im assuming viserys will be angry and daemon…well i dont think he’ll care that much because he’s so indifferent but atleast this would prove to him that aerion isa worthy brother and they would finnaly have a bond of sorts. Viserys should in my oppinion speak with Arrion one to one and ask about hi reckless behaviour, it would be a good time to ask for rheanyras hand

Author….you cooked a feast g, well done

I mean i’ve liked the story so far so, all i can say is can’t wait for it

Author i know you’re heavy on the revenge arc thing with jack, but would it be possible that you make it so that he and edward fight and for the first time jacm lets out all of the emotions he’s been hiding and just lets it all out while secretly alice,emmet,rosalie and jasper follow them and see his anger and grievances with the fammily because honestly i feel like the revenge this is just forced, im not saying to forgive him on the contrary let him leave the coven, but not kill edward