ZoroTraineeWriter

Woah finally an update.

What the heck, ninenine

Finally after waiting for 28 chapter

Well I didn't expect this. Hahahaha I thought you will follow cliche plot but didn't know you will change entire plot. Im excited to wait how you will write the next plot that differentiate from Cannon.

4-5 pound sterling

Im considering to drop this fanfic, what is the point of transmigration if he couldnt save anyone. My last straw would be lily and james. If they died im gonna drop this

To be honest i hope mc wont be another OC who wont try to change the plotline. I have read a similar books about one piece. Eventhough he is ninja have chakra but everything is the same, he let ace death and the only thing different is his harem. Telhe author didnt have knowledge to write his plot and only has knowledge for his harem collection. I hope this story is different, mc would use his time loop to change every plot

How will golden trio formed without Hermione?

Wisdom

Im giving this 5 star, To be honest it is easy to write the dialogue but for the fight and strategy it is diffficult. You need to learn by reading other fiction so you will get the idea how to write fighting scenes Well this book has intense fight but at the same time emotional scenes I know the writer are heavily influenced by chinese fiction. well chinese are around 1 billion people so it is not surprise we are influenced by them. Because among fanfiction they are the most people living on earth that become a writer