Viktor_Valburnt
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to you, sir, who understood the reference
My boy doesn’t look like he is suffering, if anything, you took it harder than him. beside…. termites? Really? Exposed to -20 degrees? And no, he isn’t ‘suffering’ for the sake of it. Boy appears in the middle of a snowstorm, barefooted, and you expect him to walk out unscathed? I only gave light to what normally would’ve happened. The ritual had no reason to help in that matter as well - Azura wants to see what he can accomplish on his own. Giving him legs would go against all her motive. I don’t want my characters to have plot armor - if something is going to shit, it really is going to shit. Without high stakes, in my opinion, a story can’t have depth. No free cookies. If him losing his legs stumped you that hard, then maybe this isn’t for you.
no, the ritual had no reason to do that - it will happen if and when the time is right, so stop asking
Next chapter is the conclusion to this Arc - just commenting here as a post note, but I edited all chapters so far that needed some of that polish. No major changes were done - just organized more, and corrected some errors; this just so that I may continue on to the second Arc without any regrets.
still has from the knees up (if it wasn't made clear) I'm not that cruel besides...
sounded too much like TikTok, there was nothing more that could be done
tiptoeing as in the tip of his wooden pointy legs