Penless

No worries enjoying the Story so far

Again the usage of phrase with same meaning and context, overdoing this would make it harder to read as the story goes on. It's becoming padding of words

Why keep using phrases with same context to the previous one. this is just spiral of words

good chose

Great 🍋

the only issue i have with this novel is the seemingly huge info dumping every chapter ruining the flow of the story telling, take for example in this chaoter he was supposed to use sword intent then 5 or so paragraph became spiral of info dumping ruining the flow of action, this might be a bad thing if the action was already in climax then info dumping suddenly entered

his morals maybe plus he is dual cultivator, the ideology of his cultivation path and lust cultivators directly opposed each other that's maybe one of the reasons of his disgust

interesting take on handseal. this should be a dual cultivation novel yet it put other cultivation novel into shame when it comes to cultivation details

Yeah probably