David_Orchard

I honestly thought that the author did a good job with power progression resets. I feel like a lot of authors bungle the power transition, and the story gets old. I found myself entertained. I have read up to 1270, and I plan on continuing. I also really appreciated a non harem or food based read. For an over saturated genre, this was really worth reading.

It started off good but just went into a sex fest.

Your story is honestly a good read. I binged through it which might be why I thought it was a tad long, but I really like where you are going with it. You really put out some impressive work. Hats off to you.

For starters, I have read up to chapter 719. The writing is good both in quality and quantity, but the story moves at a very slow pace. For the title being about Nin, I found the side stories to be very long with a great deal of POV's that really are not that significant.I do not want to give spoilers, but I will be honest that there were more than a few chapters that I skipped. I just feel like they could have been shortened not that they were not important; by my count they make up more than a third of story. I will continue to read if there are more updates, and I hope there are. It is definitely an intriguing story.

The story started out great, and I was hooked. However, after a while, I feel like the writing quality dropped. For example, the author will write a paragraph describing an obvious character and then go on to say " of course it is ..." It was like the author lost their zest for writing and went to look for words for an already short chapter. There was also close to an 80 chapter delay in the story where side characters from the previous arc did their own thing. I'm still following the story, but even the 5 chapters a week has been a lie for a long time now; heck, even the the last chapter update was 8 days ago. I still have hope, but I am losing interest fast.

after what seems pretty close to almost 90 chapters out of the dungeon, it'll be nice to go back to the main story. Irene and the gang sure got a nice vacation

This is a breath of fresh air. I love it. Normally I'm over critical about grammar, but I think the story does a great job. I never expected to enjoy this that much. I laughed so hard at some of the sayings the undead used. there were also some pretty unexpected plot twists. Nice job!!

The story is good, but I feel like the MC is a little wishy washy when it comes to his humanity. He is written as a psychopath and this brilliant assassin, but at times he is illogically stupid. There's also the bit about him finding humanity, losing it, and finding it again at what I thought were unnecessary times. Personally, it just kind of made the MC feel artificial, not totally bad but not great either. I liked how the world building played out. I thought that it was well done with different factions and incorporating multiple facets from an apocalyptic world. I really only have two major critiques. Firstly, there are large parts where I feel there is a step forward in plot, five steps back with long info dumps or a random background story, and then a mad rush of 10 steps forward with plot. I'm sure there's a grand design, but there were whole chapters at times that I just skipped. There were definitely some plot twists that I never saw coming though coupled with some pretty entertaining dialogues as well. My second critique is mostly grammar. By no means is it bad, but there are times when the completely wrong word is used or an occasional character name switch. Again, not the worst, it would just sometimes break my flow. The story as a whole is enjoyable. Thank you for your hard work. I was honestly surprised on how fast you could push out content.

I am somewhere around chapter 130 now, but the grammar is killing me. There are so many tense issues and spelling mishaps. I get that English is a brutal language, but any editor should be able to pick those errors out. Otherwise, I am enjoying the story.

I have read up to chapter 300 now. I have to say the bit about the use of Evan's name too much has been resolved . It's a good story. there's still some cringe, but I am enjoying it.