Omg I was just thinking of brightburn and how there is barley any fanfics about him. You sir have hooked me and I hope you finish this story so good luck.

Thor a god and a goddess that is the main ship I would pair or maybe another god or powerful being your choice.

HANDS

Bending? All you need is hands

UA?

Yes this is what I’m talking about I was thinking he needs weapons cause no matter how fast he is or how prepared he is he gonna die a bunch.

Okay I am loving this so far but I would love him to have like an L-drago the beyblade ability every time he gets hit he gets stronger absorbing his opponents strength or a Mahoraga ability to adapt. But keeping going your doing a good job you have me hooked can’t wait for next chapter.

Is he dumb how could he not know what those dings were. Like I bet if he hadn’t checked his system he’ll probably think he’s crazy or that the gods gave him a whack body.

What when he never called him Dad all he said was father over and over or did I just miss something.

He gonna save hashirama like the true hero he is. #Americassaviour

Man I hope this is good I freakin love Minato and especially after that Minato one shot had elevated his stance with me.

Bueno, esto se está poniendo bien. Estoy enganchado. Quiero que Homelander le tema a Daniel después de esta pelea para tener a alguien que pueda seguirle el ritmo y vencerlo.

God damn this is good can’t wait until everyone in the world gets to see what a real villain looks like and not one of those actors. The first nomu created is going to be sick I am already imagining it the seven vs nomu show the world how weak and fragile these “heroes” are.

Haven’t read but still would be interesting to have a power of all for one and started taking supe powers and a battle of all for one vs the seven would be cool. But the best battle and interaction is Soldier boy vs All for one a person who can take powers vs someone who can destroy powers I need that.

Man I am loving this ryuga for me is the best character in beyblade metal and all other beyblade series and I still have my L-Drago destructor and meteor in my room.

Okay this is the highest I can give this story there are grammatical errors in this story and the jutsu some of them are not even called right here like during Haku vs naruto secret art of water ice crystal magic mirror technique? Bro it’s Demonic Mirroring Ice Crystals. And the fights I mean made have to reread a passage again to fully understand what is happening. But I hope this gets better as it goes I am going to finish this story and will review again if it improves even a little in these few things I pointed out.

Keep up the great work and improve you have my support.

You don’t have to tell me now the author needs to split this in half the first half being completely Spanish and the other completely English. What you are doing is not great you having to make sections for English and Spanish are completely destroying the immersion I get while reading either do the half and half or do another book with just one language but either then that it’s fine some grammatical errors but better then the MTL I have read.

Haven’t read it yet but this must be good if it has crocodile in the picture and if it is about Gaara.

Entiendo que Homelander es el más fuerte en términos de fuerza física, pero Daniel debería poder vencer incluso sin su habilidad psíquica. Daniel es mucho más rápido que Homelander, ya que empuja Mach 5, mientras que Homelander tiene Mach 1,5 a 2 o se esfuerza a sí mismo a 3, debería. podría superarlo en velocidad en vuelo y le daría golpe tras golpe, no importa cuán duradero sea el nativo, si Daniel seguía golpeándolo con una fuerza de 30 toneladas o menos, tarde o temprano será derrotado incluso con sus ojos láser. debería poder reaccionar ante ello. se trata de daño acumulado.En los cómics se dice que Homelander es tan rápido como Mach 3. sigan con el buen trabajo