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Dude don't start a new one, you're already doing so well with this; it's a top of the ranking fic only because you mass release so much. If you start a new fic your release rate and motivation for this will definitely decrease and you'll make more mistakes.
If you just scroll through the chapters, the chapters with the most comments in the first few lines would have content missing in the previous chapters. Please also fix the random chapters that have everything in italics for no reason.
I think this is supposed to be a question, "Would a normal Dragon Master join a Flying Type tournament?"
Munchlax
Basically a hedonist but just for food
Nice to see that he's male again lol
I love that its at least showing the thought process behind the hit and not just randomly making Eijun a god-level batter, but hitting a homerun off the first at-bat feels like too much of a jump from where he was at. I get that this is an OP Eijun fanfic but least give him 2-3 years of development before making him this good at batting or there's just too much dissonance.
And half a chapter later I've forgotten all my issues lol this story is just too good
The story is so f*king good but I really want to drop this because of the abysmal translation. Half the chapters have missing content and the ones that don't italicize random words for no reason. Which sh*tty AI are you using bro, how am I supposed to read like this.