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Good pace, background should be built more.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading all the short stories, individually also each story was very well written. Together it creates a beautiful world that we like to read about. The grammar and quality of the language was flawless. Big thanks to the writer ❤️❤️. please continue the storyline as I'm sure more characters can easily be added with new stories.

The story was well written and characters strong but in places it was confusing who the author was talking about also one character's name got changed by mistake in the end, that shouldn't happen. Overall very enjoyable Big thanks to the author.

The story is riveting, the characters are believeable. The story is captivating so that you are left eagerly waiting for the next read. I would have liked the ending to be more complete as many characters are left with incomplete stories. All in all very enjoyable.

Waiting impatiently for new chapters, like a cat on a hot tin roof. Please upload new chapters, please please please. By the way once again love the description of little wolf pup singing "it's raining wolves".

Cutes chapter, I keep coming back to read the first few chapters. Eagerly following the story.

What's the rush, servants we're not allowed to push aristocrats around, people waited for them they didn't rush for others. Once she came to what was to be her new home she would have been shown around the whole house so that she could make any changes she wanted. Also horse riding was almost mandatory learning for young aristocrats of both gender, later if they didn't ride that was their wish.

Bollywood script anyone? Even conservative Italians also would not react in such a way but Bollywood khandani log would definitely react so.

The story is captivating and kept a good pace throughout. Characters are believeable not confusing, I had to force myself to put the mobile down. Please update the rest of the story as soon as possible. [img=recommend]