junkformissm

So like ever third chapter is either a repeat or out of order. This is kind of ridiculous. I want to know how the story ends, but not sure if I can make it .

There are a lot of duplicate chapters and some out of order...

Well written with good twists. I like stories where Dumbles hypocrisy is pointed out. Socks was great!! The second task was perfect and the losing his bathing suit hilarious.

yab-yum...just cracks me up!