As an author, I'd say this book is nice. The characters are okay although, there is little information about them that I think the author should consider. Like an illustration or something. Then coming to the l**d aspect of it, there are not many scenes about it. As the book is talking about the le*d aspect of the book, I would suggest you try to focus a bit on it. And not just the action part of the book. Overall, the book is highly recommended.

You aren't releasing the two chaps daily again, why?

Good work author, keep feeding us with this great book of yours... it's interesting and I'd love to see the end of the book.. The plot is okay, just some similarities between this one and versatile mage, it could be a coincidence. I hope so too. anyway, keep writing and don't stop.

why did you stop writing ?

This Author has been my favourite Romance Author since the day I read "Hellbound with you" The author is able and capable of bringing to life all her characters and when reading them, it feels like I'm watching a movie. The author is highly intelligent and gifted. All her books are rich in romance, suspense, a spice or more of comedy, action, and so many more that I can't even spell. Every chapter leaves its reader with a new feeling and addiction. I'm already addicted to all the books, and I won't miss this one, nothing will make me miss this. Great work Author! And I wish you more wisdom to give us the best out of the best.

A sweet Command.

Arriane is already devising methods that she would use on Sam...It's a blessing that he isn't like other men.

Thanks for these chaps Kazz, they are amazing.... As for Kari, you better don't let your friend see your man's nakedness. As for Sam, I don't believe he is a robot, he is here for a mission.

I won't

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First line... *Nathan Like....*Life

Nice chaps, but I feel they are pretty short and everything is going too fast, alright? if you continue like this....I wonder if you'll have ideas to write in the future. but all the same, good luck with your contest, as for me, I'll support you to the best of my capability.

Uhmm! Dorian is not just an Ordinary summoned Demon Lord. He is a perveted one! nice chap tho.

wearing* not hearing

Author, your book is great...I love the story BUT improve your English. Hope I'm not sounding rude? The mistake will make some readers dump the book and you wouldn't want that. I'd advise you to use Grammarly, it might be of help to you, especially with punctuation sighs, prepositions and the rest.. if you need help, come I'm @discord. I'll be willing to.

A very fantastic and interesting book....Just a few chaps and it's great, wonder when it becomes much. When reading it, I felt like I was watching a Korean drama especially when Liz woke up in the hospital and then the four boys rushed to her. It reminds me of one of my favourite c/k dramas. Anyway, this book is recommendable...just give it a try and I promise you that you won't regret it. I wish the author success in this contest and I hope! that you win!

Nice chap, but the girl was stupid....trying to be heroin when she isn't even capable...tsk! It got her the death she has always been asking for.

Come'on.....must she sleep with men for money? I dislike this type of women.

Unlike I expected!! Great writing skills from the author....He was able to combine two souls in a body, which I can't even do. The story is unique, shame I am not all that into harems like deeply, I would have been able to comment on the harem aspects. But overall, the book is fantastic. I hope the book keeps going and hope the author doesn't lose interest in the book along the line, I wouldn't want my honest review to be a waste...NVm that! but do your best though.