novelguru143

the mc gets transported ,gets scammed gets into hestia fimmilia , gets op skills ,goes into the dungeon gets another the power to travel multiverse uses this skill IN THE FUCKING DUNGEON the dungeon reacts to the skill with a monster feast .gets near death experience and fights his way out of dungeon and all this happens in a single fucking DAY over 14 chps pacing is shit , the MC has room temp iq and every character feels artificial and two dimensional with no particular character the world is botched

the mc is dumb ,does not have any thinking capabilities and has room temp iq

DUMB BITCHY MC WITH A BRAIN THE SIZE OF A FUCKING ACORN

such a dumb mc ...does he not use his brain, why would he use a skill like that in a fucking dungeon and he entered it for the first time. does the concept of caution does not exist . this dumb mother fucker got scammed, made the dungeon angry at him and made his existence known to everyone in the fucking city THIS DUMB BITCH MC IS SHITY

tftc..

don't worry , chill you are doing great 👍

superman did it in his (dc)universe where everything is already pre-designed by God.

but would that be safe.. if someone notices that an all powerful being is gonna come from a star wouldn't they destroy it . i mean if I were the mc i would not be willing to go unconscious for eons for power if it was not safe. and most important part ,the author would not write it that way even if it makes logical sense because it is hard to write omnipotent beings living with casual people .

too much