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novelguru1439dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วoh no anyways
Lot's of spoilers in this chapter. The chapter before was not me whining but explaining things. If you don't like his bloodline, or anything else just leave. No need to announce that you left.- novelguru1439dตอบกลับถึง ghustVCh 34 Explanation
- novelguru1439dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
bruh i thought it was a new chapter ,not the whining of the author. and author our comments are just that comments , just like real life when you don't like someone saying something bad you either ignore or reply . you replying gives the commenter the power to continue the conversation and you ignoreing the comments then the commenter will also ignore you.. some just point flaws and move on . some stay and make it so you understand what they are saying . In the end of the day it's your novel you do what you want with it
Ch 34 Explanation - novelguru1439dตอบกลับถึง NewbiMainAccountCh 34 Explanation
- novelguru14310dตอบกลับถึง Travis_Btmb
bruh...the amount of brain cells i lost giving a proper reason for my comment is astounding .
He is not OP right now. He will have to train HARD to grow stronger. He didn't gain a power-up. Again, this is only POTENTIAL. - novelguru14310dตอบกลับถึง DaoistWDfd8h
i didn't ask u to make him op . I asked u to see the obvious plot hole , bruh....
He is not OP right now. He will have to train HARD to grow stronger. He didn't gain a power-up. Again, this is only POTENTIAL. - novelguru14310dตอบกลับถึง
bruh
He is not OP right now. He will have to train HARD to grow stronger. He didn't gain a power-up. Again, this is only POTENTIAL. - novelguru14310dตอบกลับถึง DaoistWDfd8h
I like your novel that's why I care
He is not OP right now. He will have to train HARD to grow stronger. He didn't gain a power-up. Again, this is only POTENTIAL. - novelguru14310dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
bro am i not hating this novel i actually like it .that is why when the MC CHOOSE the powers u gave us dumb reason like "too op for this world " no sane person would choose to be weak.but MC CHOOSE to be weak when he could be stronger . that's dumb . if you don't want to make the MC op then don't give him infinite options to pick a blood line put some limitations
He is not OP right now. He will have to train HARD to grow stronger. He didn't gain a power-up. Again, this is only POTENTIAL. - novelguru14310dตอบกลับถึง Shadow_Excalibur
again bro read ...I am not talking about power i am talking about the reason that the MC chose those powers/bloodlines. and his reasoning was "too op for this world " there is the problem no sane person would choose to be weak.
A/N So it finally happened. Robert awakened his full bloodline. He is not a full Hanma or a Viltrumite. He is himself but has gotten some of the advantages both their bloodlines grant them for himself. He has given himself potential. Potential for growth, something I enjoy much more than an instant powerup or full Kryptonian ... He will never learn to fly or something like that, so don't worry about him becoming outrageously OP. - novelguru14311dตอบกลับถึง DaoistWDfd8h
and I am not unhappy about your story your story is good , I just want to help improve it .. it was a suggestion / feedback
A/N So it finally happened. Robert awakened his full bloodline. He is not a full Hanma or a Viltrumite. He is himself but has gotten some of the advantages both their bloodlines grant them for himself. He has given himself potential. Potential for growth, something I enjoy much more than an instant powerup or full Kryptonian ... He will never learn to fly or something like that, so don't worry about him becoming outrageously OP. - novelguru14311dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
outrageous is not that he is overpowered but he became dumb while choosing it ..if he were limited in choice we could understand but his reason being something like "too overpowered for this world "is outrageous i don't get the fun in that why even bloodline if you were going to Nerf him to hell and back.
A/N So it finally happened. Robert awakened his full bloodline. He is not a full Hanma or a Viltrumite. He is himself but has gotten some of the advantages both their bloodlines grant them for himself. He has given himself potential. Potential for growth, something I enjoy much more than an instant powerup or full Kryptonian ... He will never learn to fly or something like that, so don't worry about him becoming outrageously OP. - novelguru14314dตอบกลับถึง romeotango148
since when did marriage generate money.it always made family .as family the people in it make money. family is a family even in poverty or in riches
Shosanna was a former prostitute in Stom's End working for Linda's establishment until I came along and offered them all better jobs. Prostitution and brothels were in decline in Storm's End but were now stabilising. Some women liked the job and now that whores were 'in short supply', they could both decide who they slept with and raise the prices considerably. I'm certain that in a few decades, there won't be any prostitution in Storm's End. - novelguru14315dตอบกลับถึง romeotango148
prostitution generates money, marriage generates family . both are not same
Shosanna was a former prostitute in Stom's End working for Linda's establishment until I came along and offered them all better jobs. Prostitution and brothels were in decline in Storm's End but were now stabilising. Some women liked the job and now that whores were 'in short supply', they could both decide who they slept with and raise the prices considerably. I'm certain that in a few decades, there won't be any prostitution in Storm's End. - novelguru14317dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
winter is coming
Days passed, and things calmed down. The cold increased on the Hogwarts grounds, signaling that winter was near. - novelguru14324dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
you will now be retard
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even the power of Charles Xavier (professor x) is way to op for this world You don't even need to mention Jean gray or wanda ,
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- novelguru1431mthตอบกลับถึง Original_1001
man everything in this novel is forced if you think about it just a little it becomes so obvious...
Jon knew it was reckless, but he had no choices; he was late, his wolves wouldn't arrive in time before everyone was dead. He knew he had committed the greatest madness of his life, not just connecting with the minds of 12 horses heading towards the farm; he forced them to throw themselves to the ground to stop the charge attack. Even feeling his death near, he didn't give up, and while his pains and blood were evident, he forced them down, killing 2 of them in the process.