Feldman

Somehow better and worse than original attribute … good balance. Good job author on actually starting with a semblance of balance

Enjoying the story so far

This is so true

The quality of the writing has vastly diminished. It used to be a fun and funny story, now it’s just power ups and low effort battles …

Oh my gosh this is so funny!!

Oh my god, I just spit out my coffee

?????

That was actually pretty funny

Here is my feedback, don’t do other perspectives (third person etc) it ruins the pacing of the story. Good novels don’t do that. Keep up with regular posts and story will do well. Another thing, don’t let things ramp up too quickly. I feel like story has already massively increased in pace

Aaaaand we are back to Mongrol being weaver