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I don't think it's a good idea to put so many worlds in the novel, it would be better to just one instead of another reference chapter and return to the original world, there is already a lot to write in the world of Adventure. Time

At the moment it is being a great read in every way, I like the protagonist a lot and there is a lot of content that can be taken from this world, although I hope it stays calmer, I am tired of novels where the protagonist basically becomes a god in can. [spoiler for nier automata story] Likewise I see no way for this world to have a nice ending considering the AI ​​that basically manipulates every event in the canon game and the fact that there are no other humans if the protagonist is the last of his kind.

At the moment I love this story because it transmits to me the same thing as when I watched the series as a child, I just hope that it transmits to me the same fear that the lich produced in me and if the romance with the girls is good, that's how it would be. The best Adventure Time fanfic of all time.

It's a good feature although it can only be used occasionally and I hope the updates are passive and nothing too powerful otherwise it will become very boring.

I have to say it's a great read, it's a very interesting world to explore, although I only saw the movie because of what the author said about the books. If this ends well I will keep it as official, great work by the author 👍👍

It would be a good idea to give her a similar ability to time loops and thus grow Clare until she is 16 or 17 years old.

Hello, I have a question, what are the genres that this novel covers, since the author did not include them, I would like to know before reading it so as not to waste time.

It's ridiculous to call you a pedophile. It has already been said that Clare is older than in the books. If you were a pedophile, you would give him 10 years like in the original books. This is a very interesting read, don't let the idiots bother you, author.

I hope he manages to find a balance in his relationships with Wenesdey and Enid, they are both too good companions for Luke, great job, author.

Is there a trio coming? 🤔🤔🤔 Because if he comes, I will go with him😈😈😈