Kemreads
Lv14
2021-09-30 เข้าร่วมแล้วGlobal
595.3h
ของการอ่าน
112
อ่านหนังสือ
ป้าย
15โมเมนต์
272
Kemreads7mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วSubtle. Real subtle 😂
He then firmly added, "She will be my Queen, so I want you to treat her as such."- Kemreads7mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Lol she is crazy 🤣
"Meet the new member of our relationship," Annalise said. - Kemreads7mthตอบกลับถึง CeehillmCh 80 sparring with the western crown prince
- Kemreads7mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 373 Excuse Me?
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What fiancé?
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Kemreads7mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I think it would help readers if you put a little “***” or something to indicate when you jump scenes/time. It always takes me a moment to understand when the next paragraph switches abruptly. I do like the flow, I just think you need something to help the reader have a more seemless reading experience.
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Kemreads7mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Oh man I wanted to hear their game!
Kiera quelled her laughter by coughing into her closed fist. She cleared her throat, and then they began their little game. - Kemreads7mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Is that person the prince? Lol
"That was the information I needed." Her bright and happy grin reminded her of the prince. "I'm sure this will prove invaluable for a certain someone." She made emphasis on the word invaluable which made Kiera second-guess the importance of the stones. "I expect a heavy payment from the person who buys this information from me." She made a dramatic flick of her hand which caused the prince to laugh. - Kemreads7mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Ooo I wonder who gave jade hers
"The beads are made of a stone that is found near the rivers and lakes throughout our homeland. They are said to be stones made by the mountain spirits that dwell in the caves." She reached into her mind to grab hold of any information she could remember about the stones. "They are abundant and they can be found quite easily so they're relatively inexpensive. The only value the stones could possess is the ongoing tradition of gifting the jewelry to your Mate or to someone you cherish." - Kemreads7mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 28 a new dress for the general
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I love that this is the first thing he says to her ❤️
"You have quite the brilliant mind." To her surprise, the Prince didn't try anything. She looked into his face but she couldn't find any trace suggesting that he was being sarcastic with her. He continued. - Kemreads8mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
So sassy 😂😂
Rafael waited for someone to come forward to him to attempt to kill him so they could go avenge Martin. "I thought you said there was noise about wanting to fight when I was away," Rafael said to Christian after no one stepped forward. - Kemreads8mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 133 A Final Goodbye
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Yassss
But Stark ignored me completely, instead looking straight at Erik. "I'm taking him." - Kemreads8mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วAnd when I turned to look at my brother, to protest—instead of having my back, he was smiling and nodding. "Good."
- Kemreads8mthตอบกลับถึง Sravanthi82
I hope it wasn’t stark 🤞🏼🤞🏼🤞🏼
Because right before we left, her father had learned that these two had gone and gotten married, secretly. And if I hadn't gotten her out, the next step was to remove David from her. And remove her from every other man except the one the Physicists chose. - Kemreads8mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Ick. He’s gonna deserve what Rhain us about to do to him
"Come," he commanded, his grip shifting to the nape of her neck in a manner that was unmistakably coercive. When she attempted to glance back at her fallen brother, he tightened his hold, as if to underline his control over her. - Kemreads8mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
If it wasn’t his wife daughter or mother that only leaves Thomas…
Phillip shrugged his shoulders. "I don't know since there wasn't a name on the message, but I am grateful there is someone around who doesn't want to keep me in the dark like my daughter, wife, and mother. All the women in my life are not telling me everything."