rageoffire

why does it say he is 11, will we get an explanation for that.

This whole chapter is like , since i know elementary maths perfectly i can blaze through calculas. It just feels incredibly stupid. So if he has foundation in fist techniques he can master all fist techniques. Just stupid.

come on man he was working towards buying the potion for 2 years but still doesn't know the price. and you should give more context about the general value of cores of different ranks first instead of just rushing forward. It's really rushed chapters at first. U didn't write important stuff but wrote about him buying the potion. who cares about his interaction. you can develop your character later. You should have thought about what you were going to write or read some similar stories so you would have known not to make mistakes. Why would everyone know about him man. Do you think they do anything to do. If they are learning how to fight. all academy novels have the same stereotypes. Just first read some other novels so you would know what not write

shitty story. he says divine skills and gives them 10 sec cooldown. first time I am seeing someone who doesn't even know how to write .

My Girlfriend From Turquoise Pond Requests My Help After My Millennium Seclusion is much better. It atleast proper world building. Here author just gives mc problems and solves them by giving him divine ability or cultivation technique specifically for it. Hong meng Sutra for example it says its a primordial scripture but it's ability is to hide cultivation.

Story was going good and you just had to make him say that. It's really irritating and I don't know why you think people like it. It's not. So many books I stop reading because of things like that.