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This story is a breath of fresh air in the naruto fanfiction community. It brings a new and much needed realism to the universe. This story has so much potential to be one of the greats. I think I speak for everyone but we want more auther-sama. This story is just that good
Looks like you found a direction for the story. Is there anychance we will be seeing more frequent uploads? Don't get me wrong these two chapter were great and I don't want you rushing this story, if you need time take time. This story is that good that people will still read. But could you maybe give an indication of how often you plan to upload now. No pressure on sticking to it. But a general idea would be really nice
I would like to see Takuma actually work towards a goal. I know his end goal is to be strong enough to survive. But to what end? Just surviving isn't living. I hope Takuma realizes that. And does he actually have a road map to get that strong. I mean regular jonin are fodder in the 4th war. And at this rate, with no underlying goals or strategy Takuma wont even get to jonin level by then. I mean Takuma doesn't even know what kind of shinobe he wants be yet. The way he is obsessed with improving bit by bit, I would expect him to do more experiments with chakra and basic jutsu to leverage any knowledge he has from his experience in his past life. Even if he doesn't, or will never steal bloodlines, one could easily leverage high school level physics and chemistry to make extremely powerful jutsu. Especially with a major earth affinity and minor water affinity. He was coming uo with ideas of how to leverage the transformation jutsu when he learned it. Even though that never worked out, how come we didnt see him go through the same thing with the 2 new jutsu he learned. Regarding relationships I would like to see a romance form with a pure civilian. Mainly because we don't see that often in naruto fanfics. But also because in his previous life he was a civilian and I would like to see him struggle a bit more with his changing ideologies. Maybe a civilian romance could keep him grounded?
Hands down eyes of god. This is just too OP not to chose. The other choices just give rudra more powerful techniques which he would get naturally just playing the game and halfway to tier 5. With eyes of god he could find treasures, secrets and skills that could verywell eclipse the other 2 moves in power alone. With the cuber corp becoming active again what ig rudra uses the eyes during a meeting with gaia and gets even more insite to the end game of the game and the beginning of this eventual war that he is supposed to lead