NeonPLay250

Thanks for chapter

Yes, the work is completed. Original name: 斗罗之擎天射日

I read this work on a Chinese site and I can say that it is very high quality. Of course, not without flaws. One commentator earlier mentioned the disproportionately unbalanced development of the family and literally feeding his sister with a golden spoon, although the main character gave a lot and gave up a lot for them. There are several poisonous moments that you can skip and read on. According to all the canons of Chinese authors, the plot is quite stretched out, although I must say that if San Gege or Yu xiao Pig are killed too early, the plot loses its meaning and such works are quickly abandoned. Therefore, sometimes for the plot of two bastards, an artificial "buff" is added. About the pros. The main character is smart and cautious. Not a typical main character with plot armor. The world is big and quite alive and not everything revolves around a few people. I recommend trying to read this fic.

Well, let's start with the fact that the main character is a smug idiot. The author constantly talks about caution and correct views, but does not follow them at all. It makes no difference whether you give the OP powers all at once or in parts, anyway, within 1-2 months he has already become one of the strongest in existence. He talks about kindness and compassion, but in others he sees only characters from TV. It would seem that the world is well-developed and the story is extensive, but this is completely unnecessary, since the root of everything is that this is just fan fiction. No need for unnecessary drama and useless stretching of words. Empty words and a colossal ocean of information. An extremely drawn-out plot and 0% of any interesting actions or interactions. Just a description of what is happening and his winning the lottery. The main character does not use even 10% of the powers he received to the proper extent. Narcissistic, hypocritical, selfish, contradictory - these are the words that describe the main character. It's a shame about the wasted time. I do not recommend. 3/10.

I put the bare minimum and I know I'm not objective, but it's not worth it. I have no complaints about the translator, just throw this work away 20% racism. 20% nazism. 20% chinese superiority over the whole world. 20% generic protagonist with weird speech and negative intelligence. 20% maximally disgusting plot with huge plot problems. Total: -100 out of 10

dropped

The story is boring, the main character is absolutely useless. The story is about nothing. No goals, with each chapter mc contradicts itself. Idleness + women. 0 hours of training or effort but still behaves cool. Slave of the system. I really regret those hours that I spent on 80 chapters

very interesting, the story is quite lively. The main character is also not bad. But it would be nice if the author translated the chapters faster than at least 3-5 per day considering that there are almost 3 hundred of them in the original. Use chat gpt for translation and use minimal editing. + The story is interesting. - Long wait. If possible, tell me where (website) I can read the original in full. I could not register in ciweimao

On which site can I read this in full?

I was completely disappointed, I saw a large number of chapters in this work and decided to read and in the beginning everything was even good, but closer to chapter 100 it turns into absurdity. Too many appeals of the “author of 4 dimensions” from an intellectual school novel, this has turned into a cheap comedy. Constant meaningless monologues. The characters became stupid. The character of the characters is not preserved. The first 50 chapters are false. I believed and deceived me.