BK201_6472

So far, it's easily one of the best in the genre. Very well developed and with a very good MC, the plot unfolds smoothly, in a good way, without unnecessary drama, and with enough detail to allow for good immersion and understanding of everything.

The first two chapters are probably the best two of a novel beginning I've ever seen. The beginning of the novel is very good, and I really hoped that I would be reading one of the best novels +18, until I got to chapter 14.... From chapter 1, you are introduced to the mother of the mc, from there you get attached to her, one of her strengths is the mc being adopted, that is, it opens a line for the mother to be a virgin, but comes chapter 14 and spoils it all, if it's just a used one then why all that history before??? I'd put that she was a widow or something right in chapter 1 or 2, instead of winding up her past until readers get attached to her. Even if it wasn't NTR, the feeling is the same. The beginning of the novel suggests that the MC would be a dominating MC, but the entire first volume becomes a weak liability, what's the point of you selling the novel one way, so that in the end it's another?? ? The entire volume looks like the mc's mother who is the main and not him, pathetic. Want to write a passive MC story, or a Yuri NTR story? Write, but tell from the beginning that it will be so, and don't mislead readers. I start so promising to later turn this joke, for those who will read this review of mine, if you just like bitching, the novel will be good, but if you're looking for something more, skip it.