IndigoLion

Right forgot to add that I REALLY HOPE its not gonna turn into a kinfrom building type novel, mc should have companions but I don’t want him to have a whole 1000 people following him

Ok, to start, I’m Addressing The reviews others made about the pushover and nanny Mc. Believe me, it might be annoying at first but in like 10 chapters it gets much better. Right now I have read 100+ chapters and have really likEd it. However, there are a couple of oofs that turn me off a bit. + Action scenes are amazing Abilities and world background Is compelling Even if mc seems op sometimes you can see that he’s A frog in a well at some moments. Other good things but I’m Too lazy to write - First off, I don’t Like how he’s Been stuck in an itty bitty town for so many chapters, I want him to move on and explore the world, there is bound to be a LOT more interesting things. Second, I feel there is TOO much emphasis on r***. Like I get he wants to make rules and not allow those bad things to happen, but like there’s A reference to what happens to someone who r**** like every other chapter, it gets too repetitive considering he hasn’t Said anything about other things like people bullying or taking advantage or other things, he can’t control everyone. I feel like I’m the portal mini arc he progressed too fast, like a few chapters and he maxed every stat and basically just has to farm LOTS of monsters just to get the occupation Again, I hope he moves on fast, it’s getting really boring in the same place. But I lIke the book :) [img=update]

Remember When he was impaled by a tree in the beginning And almost dead. The “system” transferred That struggle into a regeneration Ability :) and ofc the mc has to be special duh

Dude stick to one tense pls, I’m Already getting headaches from reading this. U switch from past and present every paragraph.

I don’t Get it, why did the mc get so angry when his friends died. I assume He has seen them die multiple times since Even if they get killed they can not die if they have a certain amount of coins. So they weren’t Really dead just alive in the real world ?

Thanks man I realized a bit later. Really loved the book, keep going. I can’t buy Chapters :(

Wasn’t He a cat, how is he a man now?? I’m confused Or is this the bull that . Idk man explain ple

Bro these plot holes, he can only see a meter around him but he saw the large building stretching for miles???

How would he know that if he only had a meter of perception bruh

Bro what, he felt the journey. Wack…