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honestly the fact that castle can't date other women when he's not with beckett yet is just ridiculous if castle in the show hadn't had sex with with his ex and dated other women she would have never seen him as desirable to accept his quirks like an unhealthy obsession with murder or his childish antics if he is just some rich guy obsessed with murder constantly showing her up he has 0 chance with a girl like beckett who is prideful and filled with inconsistencies on what she says she likes dislikes needs and wants and what she actually needs wants likes and dislikes
yeah but so did Mikael and Esther and they turned on them after awhile because of their heightened emotions this is the perfect time to lock on deep bonds that can last a thousand years
why bring Ayanna at all i mean sure she's got magic knowledge but he could've gotten that from dahlia if he'd kept her alive for. little longer now he has created two enemies ayannas daughter who will blame him for the disappearance of her mother and ayanna for being taken against her will don't play with your food acting like klaus at least it took klaus 500 years to become really manipulative play with their food type your mc just walks out the gate with it
imagine flare release with layered genjutsu makes me think it would be almost as powerful as the kurama clan kekkai genkai
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why hide their abilities telling the truth could foster trust could nip finn thinking they were unnatural in the bud by saying as proof that they have become one with an aspect of magic there are a hundred ways to play this staying silent and distancing himself from the family is the worst one
please let her realize shisui used a genjutsu on her to hate menma next chapter come on give him a ride or die uchiha chick
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why did you nerf kid omega i mean if all he has is the mind ability there are a hundred genius level intellectual that are better then kid omega no telekinesis no telepathy no psionic generation I mean it's not really kid omega without that just off brand tony stark with occlumency
no way klaus would ignore someone using his dead brothers name for this long especially when he blames himself a little for Henrik's death