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You could make Klein have his own tarot club in this world instead of bringing the old members, it would be much more fun and would bring another purpose to the story, even if there are no beyonder potions in this world, Klein as a great old one can make them rise up in the world. sequence with benefits just like the evil gods in the second book.
How can this be better? lol two of the most powerful and terrifying beings in web novels don't need to move a muscle to fight, their ability to deceive and turn people into their puppets/steal their destinies can annihilate any plan, deception is an art that if used properly can make An incredible character, read Lord of Mysteries and change your perspective.
Boring is the only word I can't use to describe this, the author throws out a lot of more or less useless information all the time, I know it's necessary but the author manages to make everything quite tedious to the point where it's difficult to continue reading, I could have used a much simpler power too and that would fit into the world of jujutsu, unfortunately nothing in this fic convinced me to continue, at least the author has good writing skills, he just needs to slightly change the way he writes, try not to invest too much time in describing situations simple, also avoid wasting too much time focusing on the baby phase of the protagonists, this makes it more boring because we have to follow useless thoughts there knowing that the mc can't even wipe his own ass, save these thoughts for when he can really interfere with something in your life.