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ruffles_096

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2021-09-03 เข้าร่วมแล้วUnited States
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    ruffles_0962yr
    ตอบกลับถึง CONCUSSIONARMY

    That's true, but to my knowledge, highly populated cities were very hard to find before the Industrial Revolution, and numbers like 100 were considered reasonably significant for the time.

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    ตอบกลับถึง readtokilltime

    Yeah, that's fair; after re-reading over some of the later chapters and the noble meetup, I realized that I made my mc way too nice, even to the point of cluelessness, and once I get to editing later chapters I'll make sure to fix that. Thanks for pointing it out though ^_^.

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    ตอบกลับถึง Professional_hater

    Yeah, it doesn't, and is something I will hopefully change by the end of today. Also, regarding how chapters 25 and 26 have plot points that develope in an unrealistic way, once I get to them, I will make sure to correct those as well. Thanks for pointing it out ^_^.

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    ruffles_0962yr
    ตอบกลับถึง TheTrueGilgamesh

    Don't worry about it, I know how easy it is to get carried away when criticizing someone, also thanks for ranking my novel so high on your list ^_^.

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    ruffles_0962yr
    ตอบกลับถึง TheTrueGilgamesh

    After looking further into it, I see myself agreeing with your statements regarding the potential danger merchants pose to Moura and would like to apologize for my lack of thought while writing this part of the book. I would also like to thank you for pointing it out and will be sure to fix this part of the story before making any new chapters.

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    ruffles_0962yr
    ตอบกลับถึง TheTrueGilgamesh

    Correct me if I am wrong, but to my knowledge, unlike nobles, merchants did not own armies, and although economically influential, ordinary merchants were at best on par with nobles. As for selling blueprints to weapons, I am pretty sure it would take someone truly braided to bring the concept of such weapons into a world where countries are constantly at war. And may I remind you, carding machines and water frames were used to facilitate the production of textiles, not as weapons.

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    ruffles_0962yr
    ตอบกลับถึง LunarEcho

    Well, as unlikely as that would be, considering that there are other towns nearby that could be used to compare living situations, if it were to happen, the ability would only lose effect until the people once more believed the amount is fair.

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    ruffles_0962yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Bloodawn

    Thanks for the recommendation; I'm using the free version right now, but I'm not going to upgrade to premium; I just don't want to spend money on it.

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    ruffles_0962yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Afonso_Aaron

    No, it's not. There's no specific reason; I just personally don't like the notion of harems and don't want them to become a prominent part of the story, nor believe they would help the story in any way.

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    ruffles_0962yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Scareskin

    The next level up will only be 1K, but that's because the only real reason as to why Arsenio's skill is working so well is because the people he is talking to are not trying to hide much from him, and if they did try to hide their intentions, the skill wouldn't be of much help, for now, that is.

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    ruffles_0962yr
    ตอบกลับถึง NightOwl_Soren

    Currently, he is slightly taller than the average for his time, being 109 cm tall, has brown curly hair, is caucasian, and is not particularly handsome or ugly. (Sorry if the description is not up to the standard, I am not good with character design and mostly relied on what I could find regarding Afonso of Portugal)

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    ruffles_0962yr
    ตอบกลับถึง LontraDiabetica

    Thanks for pointing that out; I'll make sure to change that before the end of the week ^_^

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    ตอบกลับถึง Alex_Patino_1711

    Yea, someone else also pointed that out, and it will be fixed by the end of the week, it's just that writing new chapters takes up most of my free time, sorry for the inconvenience.

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    ruffles_0962yr
    ตอบกลับถึง DlMarin

    My bad, I'll make sure to fix that this coming week; thanks for pointing that out btw. ^_^

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    ตอบกลับถึง Scareskin

    Thanks for the feedback, and I'll try to update more often ^_^

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    ruffles_0962yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Ydo_Dominnus

    Thank you; Muito obrigado ^_^ (PS: I assume that this is how you say thank you in Portuguese, please correct me if I am wrong.)

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    ruffles_0962yr
    ตอบกลับถึง si_vis_pacem_para

    Glad to hear that ^_^

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    ruffles_0962yr
    ตอบกลับถึง si_vis_pacem_para

    WARNING SPOILERS AHEAD Honestly, I just wanted a reason for the mc to go to the new world, but I didn't want to make them miss out on too many of the wars that happened around that time in Europe. Without being forced to contribute of course, so considering Spain's active war history, Cristopher Colombus going to Portugal first when asking for money, and Jhon the II's competence at ruling I felt that Portugal would be a good place where to have the beginning of the story to take place.

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    ruffles_0962yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Dean_XX

    Assuming that this is not just a bot, sorry, but I do not want to monetize this novel in any way as it's just a passion project of mine, and the second I feel pressure to update constantly, I will probably end up dropping the book.

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    ruffles_0962yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Galassa

    Thank you very much ^_^

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