RANCIDITY

ngl it is pretty convincing

like it

thanks for the chapter and great Start .

Yes

this is not a 'proper logic ' that you trying to entail even you don't know what will happen you only seeing from your biased eyes that it is OBviOus, there are many paths that Lilia can choose , not choosing either of them and be content with there arrangement, or be more forceful on going with seraph. Paul can cheat with someone from village while she is pregnant .and it is proper logic according to 'you' because you like this type of stories. that's it nothing more, nothing less

no , I don't like the sharing the secret of reincarnation 'early' without the development of characters

victim not 'used'

bro, you can't quantify but you can estimate trust , like trust in stranger vs trust in family.. even if it's true some people don't like certain actions.

it is not really about telling reincarnation,..its more about telling someone you are reincarnated without knowing other person/lover more. I also enjoyed story when person tell they are reincarnated like samsara fanfic but the development is not there, and mc did not even read orginal but trust roxy . that's why.

first one already read. second is already trash because he told roxy , he is reincarnated any other recommendations?