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The translation is very well done and it's one of the strong points of this novel. At this point as long as it's readable and is not composed of some incompressible sentences made purely by mtl it already has a plus point in my heart. Now to the things that I don't like, the mc doesn't know or is not too sure wether he is in a real world or just in a game I can understand that. But it's the fact that other characters is also acting like a morons and out of character is what throws me off, it's like the mc is a psychiatric patient that had escaped the mental hospital and his mental illness is infectious it's just way too much for me to see seele act like a chunni all of a sudden when all they did is climb up a wall. Lastly the gas lighting in this novel is just way too much it's like the mc makes some very questionable actions that doesn't really make any sense but other characters just make some conclusions in their mind that favors the mc.
Not a fan of this type of story telling.......... Like just straight up telling the readers that your mc stronger than this certain characters and he can also now feel and control this very special type of energy through his years of training is not very entertaining and makes the mc's power feel like BS. It's like this: - Oh his father and mother is very talented in this type of things and field hence many people helps them and he is very talented. - Oh he also obtained a devil fruit out of thin air. - Oh btw he already surpassed his father when it comes to the mastery and control of chakra. - Oh btw if it wasn't obvious he is also very talented that genius character A can barely keep up with him. So talented in fact, genius character B also can't keep up with him in taijutsu where his is supposed to be excelling at. - Oh and before I forgot through the hard training that he had undergone for years he can also now feel this very special and powerful type of energy. Like you know? It's not very fun to read and just plain boring. Although this review comes from the opinion that I have after reading chapter 1 but as a starting chapter it's not very promising and it makes the readers (me specifically) lost interest in the novel entirely. I hope this type of stuff does not happen often otherwise this novel is gonna be like a boring Wikipedia full of info dumps. I might come back and change my review if I ever have the energy to read the following chapters but 3.8 is the highest it can get from me for now. Also I am not really saying all this to just roast the author, but to make the author avoid this type of story telling because it's not very entertaining to read. The grammar is fine though and the premise is rather interesting,so very well done.
Talk about being fair huh.........
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He's wearing a helmet maybe