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I am so sorry this novel did not find the needed support. It is the best I have read in the past years. It is so well written. It kept me in suspense until the moment Aiden and Amy leave the hospital. In the second part, one can feel the claustrophobia of being locked in a house full of people. I love Aiden's character - even if the author wanted to depict a toxic relationship, I find the romance between him and Kate more realistic. Even if the novel lacks an end, I don't think it is necessary. Enough is said for the readers to use their imagination. This could be a great paper book. Enjoy the reading!

I finished the book and I must say it is the best thing I've read in the past five-six years. I do not dislike that it's not finished, I've seen books that left the end to the readers' guess. I am only sorry that you didn't find the necessary support here. However your book has great potential outside the virtual world. It is so well-written. The novel kept me in suspense until the moment Amy and Aiden leave the hospital. I guess I didn't like what followed because I could feel the claustrophobia of being locked in a house full of people. I think Aiden is a better character, he has more depth and charm. Chase is too rigid and stubborn, you depicted him as a guy whose only strong point is his great ability of making love to the extent that I agreed to Nate when he said Chase is looking for a regular lay. Somehow Chases and Kate's love is not lived, only put into words while their binding has nothing to do with sacred marriages. I do not know how knowledgeable you are in this subject. All in all, great book.

In fact, Aiden is my type of guy, I'm sorry he got to be the bad character in this story that began so nicely. He's so sweet and lovable, in the beggining of the story. Getting drawn to the dark side was really an unexpected plost twist for me. But I guess that I was projecting somebody else's features into him. Except for the eyes, which are the same, I could not picture him as you described him, I pictured him like another Aiden of mine, the real Aiden, not the fake one who would hurt me as if I was an object, an evil creature, not a human being. I'll leave a feedback on the novel, once I finish reading all chapters, to make myself clearer.

Well, using Aiden's and Amy's characters is just for the sake of metaphors. The Aiden I'm referring to is not my ex-boyfriend, in fact not a boyfriend at all, and the Amy I'm referring to is not my sister in any way, not even a sorority. I refer to people that pretend to be part of the light when in fact they are mere exponents of the darkness in the world. Fake people who would not get out of their way to hurt and harm others based on their subjective perceptions and the preconceptions they have. People that have nothing to do with the light, but don't let others who truly are be. People who interphere with the lives of those who really belong to the light, trying to instill their ideas upon them. So sad!

Wow, this chapter broke my heart. That part with: he sees me like an object, not a living human... I wish my Aiden and my Amy read this so that they understand why, and just channel their rage in another direction.

"No one on my side." I felt that...

"No one on my side" Ouch, I felt that...

mine too 🙂

I was expecting it...

My, oh, my... it's like i'm reading my story... it's incredible how life is made of patterns, and there are so many similarities between lives...