MagnanimousMaestro

Overall, it's a 5 star imo, the worldbuilding is nice and the first chapter sets a tone for the rest of the story, the characters are fleshed out and have their own personalities, the only problem I had was the grammar which can be easily fixed

ik

I didn't know that, I was focused on getting the point across,my bad

an on point and concise review

no problem my comrade

overall, the concept is amazing, the world building the character development, they are all high points of the story, I'll give you three tips, 1 is the make sure the sentences aren't too long, spellcheck and update more, other than that, this is a pretty solid book

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creative naming

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you should try to avoid long sentences