MIR_Devalanci

ok review bomb was too strong word for this. but what are you gonna do though? You don't take kindly to threats? so what? Not going to accept that you messed up you own story? not going to accept that you don't give f to your regular readers? Here is thing bro the best thing you can do for you is to delete my comment. Why? Because you are the one who is profiting from this story not me. Just go around the Wn and see how many stories lost their value just Because the author thought he is THE Guy. We readers can just move from a story to another but writers can't. it's hard for a good idea to come up with and writing a story around it. So accept your mistake and be humble.

kill oliver and aliyah please. i want him to try doing suicide after all those depression.

if they all die after so much then this story doesn’t make sense. By the way what is the motive of this story? What effect does mc have in everything? It sometimes feels like author is writing anything he randomly thought when he woke up from sleep. And sometimes it feels like q story with well connected plot.

There is no way to keep absolute peace. Either you follow hashirama or madara style. Either way after that powerful government steps down or dies everything will return to as chaotic as it was.

We didn't get to see his stats after the timeskip

I think everyone will be able to enjoy the story more if there are no real life references. Make new characters and give them new background. It will be more enjoyable. but if there are references to real life people someone at some point will feel awkward if they see their favourite athlete get defeted.

no please don't kill junko.She is like a breath of fresh air to this story

It gives me young master vibe. My lord this, my lord that. Like those Chinese novels where they always say young master.

I feel so sorry for you. Your novel could become a huge hit if had nice release schedule but unfortunately you have real life situations to handle. Still many like us will be there man.Never drop the story.❤️

chill