2 years and still no family sadge

I was really enjoying this story, plenty of character progression and finally having good shit happen to him after his tragic backstory, and then the author chose to tear everything apart and make him the new spiderman. i get having to have drama, and I get you can't have everything go well all the time, but non stop the author has been throwing enemy's, shield, and more enemies with almost no break and then crippling his social life as well.

best i can do take it or leave it

I'm Going to read the squirrel girl comic books and edit the first Two chapter before writing much more, if only to give an actual reason for squirrel girl to take him in besides her friends all dieing

or this

or this

probably the same as you react to this

let me know if you like it, Let me know what you think i Can improve on. I'm writing basically everything in this story off the top of my head on my phone while checking Wikipedia to make sure I'm not completely wrong on anything, but this is an au so try to enjoy!

you're really mad about people writing what they want to write, why don't you go write the story you want where you describe how the fmc will sleep with anyone but the mc to avoid people with a "inferiority complex"

according to another comment I saw he has sex with the bunny lady in a dungeon after the fact he's hired an escort to take care of her. I get the world is supposed to have looser morals. this guy is from our world and no matter how I look at it I feel like he really is just a cuckold. good luck with the novel though

It's a great story, but seriously what the fuck. I get it, he doesn't want to sleep with them that's fine, but why the fuck is he the one hiring people to have sex with them. he made a whole point about not wanting them fucking random guys for "some reason" but then goes and makes himself look like a cuckold .if your not romantically involved why are you managing their sexual urges. it's been stated they need someone to take care of urges in the dungeon they're planning on going to (dropped chapter 43) but then from what I've read from other commenters has then proceeded to sleep with the one person he hired the escort for. make it make sense.

I mean, you say that as if when someone in a fanfic gets a system they shouldn't be the one benefitting from it the most. systems are given to protagonists because they're usually losers with no skills and when you take the system meant to help this week guy and you give it to let's say Luffy, it feels like it's not really the protagonists system anymore. but I do get where your coming from. good day sir.