griffin_mage

I am now fed up with things. It's more than 350 chapters and canon still has not started.The story is progressing at a snail pace. there is no time skip.Although the story is good, I don't want to read the story of 2000 chapters without even starting canon events.If the story arc doesn't change then I will drop it

At chapter 369It is the best Naruto fanfic period.Story, pacing, character development, Village politics everything is really good.But I have only one complaint, when is the main Naruto arc will start. There is no entry of Naruto as of yet except one time brief mention.Otherwise I am very happy with this fanfic.Thank you.

Thank you for fixing the spacing.This is a really good book. The story is really interesting and keeps you looking for more. The system is really good as it doesn't assist mc in everything and on top of it mc has to complete a task for every talent.

that's the default name of the planet after reincarnation in almost every web novel. 😆 so it's fine

same here

For all the intelligence why he can't act like a proper child. why is everyone creeped about it. I don't understand.As far as I know, all the highly intelligent people can easily act different emotions or personally.

Age of Wu Mo is a mystery to me. He was supposed to be young around 22 - 23 but after he created the aging serum there are hints that he supposedly around 30. even his forgotten girlfriend is mentioned to be 30. Along with things you mentioned this is already a mess.

for god's sake, why can't you increase your talent in cultivation. it will be easy after that.

no world building, no character depth. no logic and math.