JackalVadim

Мне нравится история, жду продолжения

Автор, спасибо за работу, я следил за фанфиком с первых глав и рад видеть его конец)

Good

Great plot and lively characters! I will be glad to wait for your further works, author! [img=Feeling it][img=Your move][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

Incredible, friend, you are a genius!

Просто супер, прочитал с огромным удовольствием. Жду продолжения. Автор, больше вдохновения для тебя![img=Your move][img=coins][img=coins]

I have mixed feelings about your work. On the one hand, it is interesting to read even with the Chinese style of storytelling. On the other hand, there is a feeling that the chronology of events is confused, the islands are out of place, it is not clear what is happening with the statistics, the hero is unreasonably strong in some moments, the statistics become either big or small at some moments. (it turns out that the heroes say that they have become much stronger, but in fact they are either weaker or the same as they were), Shiki is in prison, then free, then back in prison, Aokiji, Kuzan and Akainu became admirals, then became admirals again, after which they became admirals again...

I'm not criticizing, but it's funny how different people have different opinions about Ruining Everything. This is my position, but a harem, friendship with a hostile Konoha, becoming Hokage instead of Kazekage, controlling people's minds is a way to “ruin everything.” While I agree with others, the idea of ​​caring for children fits well with Gojo's formulaic character.

Interesting article, I like stories outside of Konoha. I'm looking forward to the continuation. Thanks to the author for your work.[img=More pls][img=Feeling it]

Как он использует метод дыхания в утробе?