Dimi_0068

I personally like the story so far. So please continue as is and you should only focus on constructive criticism. It is your story after all.

Thanks for the chapter. I like the story so far,but up until now the main chara just did everything that kakuzu would have done. So the personality of the isekaied person doesn't really come out much,try to make him things that the kakuzu wouldn't do for example let him learn medicine. Because if he wants to do anything with the cells he has got to learn medicine and/or sealing jutsu. And maybe let him combine his two chakra types for a kekkai genkai.

Thank you for the chapter!

thanks for the chapters

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter. BTW I think it would be beneficial for the protagonist if he learned 'cold reading'(basically analysing of the body langugage,posture,speech and aura of a person and through that he could get a rough idea of the person's life. Also the protag should keep on learning languages.

Thanks for the chapter. Also I like where this story is going,you should just stay consistent with the character description .Make poseidon act and speak more like a wise men. For future powers you could use the ki application from dragonball or go full ultra instinct mastered. Maybe even let him use his pools of inspiration to learn how to control the life force from grand zeno to control the multiverse. Naturally that should only be adapted in the later chapters,otherwise it would be too broken. Also you make him look into characters like 'rick sanchez' or 'reed richards' so that he can travel trhough the multiverse. Also in the later parts of the greek mythology (time of heroes,argonauts etc) the gods dont really interact much so you could make a huge time skips,so that we get to the dc og time line.

In the next chapter you could make it so that poseidon gifts pandora the characteristic "paranoia". This would counteract her curiosity that makes her open the box in the first place and in turn destroys zeus' plan

I like the story so far, also I wanted to mention that her name is not "gilen", it is "ghislaine". Don't know whether you knew about it before or you are just too lazy to write her whole name

Thanks for the chapter! By the way I wanted to ask whether you plan to give wolverine a dose of compound V too. Because I don't think he could win against homelander. The superpower that he would gain could just be an extra bit of super strength.