Happy_Person_8656

... Thank you!

Symbolism. Marco's the lost soul.

This is a great novel. It's very perceptive and the storyline is awesome. The writing is simple, but a little too simple, so personally I'd prefer a bit of description. But it's really easy to read. The MC has an amusing personality and the world building is pretty vivid. Wonderful work!

Sympathetic Person: What were his last words? Relative (sobbing): He...(gulps and weeps hard) he sighed... Sympathetic Person: ... At least make your last words valuable, mate.

You have succeeded in making me feel worthless. Without uttering a word. That's a new record. Very insightful, though.

It's all good. The chapter was great, the writing was great, characters were awesome. Thank you for lighting up my week and I hope you feel amazing soon :)

I just--I can't even--how perfect is this? How much more Tito Charles can you get? That "...do whatever." is amazing, tho.

Thanks a lot for the honest review. I am not offended at all and I appreciate your frankness. I have just stated the reason for my heavy description in the synopsis. Hope you understand :)

Hey, thanks a lot for trying my novel and giving a helpful review. There is a reason for the long paragraphs and description and I have just mentioned it in the synopsis as this is an issue being pointed out by many readers. I'll try to edit them and make them better. Thanks again :)