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See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Fantastic read that adds much delight to the genre. The vivid descriptions and keen attention to detail are definitely going to have you immersed in this story to the point you lose track of time itself! Well done, keep it up author!!

Decent pacing with a concept not super common on the platform. Hopefully it idls done well and can be something great. I'm not sure what else to say.

Thanks Sien!

thanks for the review!

The story is interesting and characters are unique so that you can get invested in them. there are some typographical errors and grammar mistakes, but not enough to distract from the story. Keep it up author!

The book starts out with a pretty relatable activity and allows the author to paint a vivid picture of the scene and characters present. Its an immersive approach and right as you're getting pulled in you're suddenly thrust into the action, its an impressive approach! It allows the worldbuilding and the character development to flow seamlessly into the story!

Eve, I can't get over the emotions you manage to pack into the chapters. It's amazing. Thanks for all the hard work

This isn't my usual genre of choice, but I found myself captivated from the first chapter. Seriously, the author does a wonderful job pulling you into the world, yet keeps enough mystery to always want more. I'll be keeping an eye on this one! Keep it up!!

Amazing first chapter!